Thank you(please read and tell me what you think)

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Open Poetry #16

Thank you(please read and tell me what you think)

Guardurthoughts
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since 2001-10-16

Posts 66

0 posted 2001-10-17 10:54 PM

We kiss
I giggle
you smile
our hearts jump
we hug you send me a soft smile
our spirits soar
clouds are dancing above us
laughter fills us both as
the warm sun dances across our skin
the love we share glows
our inner child shines brightly
for we are happy
my lips quiver you hold me tighter
I listin
I breath
I float
you watch
........Thank you

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Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2001-10-17 11:14 PM

I love the images you portray in this. Makes me wanna kiss someone!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-10-17 11:17 PM

I think you have done a wonderful job of
a very romantic poem.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-17 11:47 PM

*sigh* starting with a kiss and floating....sounds like love to me. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Guardurthoughts
Member

since 2001-10-16

Posts 66

4 posted 2001-10-18 01:33 AM

Thanks 2 the people who replied to my poetry
I hope to read your poetry as well!v>

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rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-10-19 07:21 AM

This is my first read for your poetry. This is so light as air and lovely! Very well done. Welcome to the pages of blue. I hope you enjoy our world.

Sincerely,
Regina

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