Open Poetry #16 |
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Lost Dreams |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada ![]() |
Lost Dreams Looking into deep darkness I see not the shining stars no longer is there sparkle to feed the dreams of desire They fly away on snowflakes as the winds howl at my heart leaving tears of such sorrow bleeding frozen drops of blood Fantasy without color as magic fades far away returning now to the dust as reality sets in Hope leaves a heart forever drifting into deepest space as tears again fill my eyes bidding farewell to lost dreams Karen Torbiak 2001© |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Karen, I know just how you feel; I too always try to hang on to every blessing I have, but deep down, I feel desperate for something more, and I can't help but feel sad every now and then. (sad sigh) You will make a man so very lucky, for you are the shooting star of his dreams! (sigh) Hold on to your beautiful dreams always, sweet Karen, for you are the dream wevaer, and you can make them happen! I almost left here because I felt no one cared about my dreams here, but then, you and everyone came there for me! (big hugggsssssss) Thank you so so much! God Bless You, sweet star! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hope leaves a heart forever drifting into deepest space as tears again fill my eyes bidding farewell to lost dream ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh such a sad write Karen. But, very very well said. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm going to the Cosmic Lost and Found Dept tomorrow to find a dream I lost long ago....want me to search for yours too? |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very touching, well done Startime!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is sad, Startime, but very good. I hope everything is alright. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I know these feelings well..you have written well the sadness of lost dreams... |
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