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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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0 posted 2001-10-17 11:42 AM


WRONG or RIGHT?

Nothing is ever wrong,
things, acts, people,
simple vibrate
at different frequencies.
Problem: some thoughts
and acts cause pain to others,
and that seems wrong
so we act on what ‘seems.’

I've suffered much of such perceived 'wrong';
spent a great deal of time
attempting to make
perceived ‘wrongs’ into ‘rights’;

I sought justice: who doesn’t?
But the more I strove for it,
the more it eluded me,
Why?
because I sought it in a way
that was pleasing to me
using judgement, and force:
the world had to adapt to my beliefs,
How could I ever be ‘wrong’ in my feelings?

Reacting to so-called 'wrongs'
is not accepting what is, or was.
Attempting to change the pattern
to a more personally pleasing image
ignores the others’ will in the process.
There is a better way: who knows it?

© Copyright 2001 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2001-10-17 12:16 PM


The concept of right and wrong
Is a matter of perspective
The tight action from one
Can wrong someone else.

I’ll trust my justice,
To be judged by a higher authority.

Interesting write

Gloom

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
Posts 818
USA
2 posted 2001-10-17 02:07 PM


Very indepth writing.  Personally, I believe the worst "wrong" is causing someone else hurt and pain. No matter what the reason, there's never an excuse for it even if you've been hurt yourself. To me, that is the ultimate wrong...causing pain.  

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-
Anna

RosePetal
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since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985
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3 posted 2001-10-17 11:42 PM


Don't get me wrong, I'm not a mean person at all. In fact, I am really sweet until you do me wrong! I have to say though that I believe in an eye for an eye...If someone insults me I am going to insult them to let them know how it made me feel when they did it to me and hopefully they will learn how to be nicer.
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