Open Poetry #16 |
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A Mother's Song |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania ![]() |
A Mother’s Song A whole new life at once unfurled When she arrived, so warmly curled In wraps of cotton, frill of lace The pink of rosebud on her face Now all has changed in mind and soul All senses redirect the goal A purpose has been found to live Abounding love to sweetly give The gentleness of mother’s role Is what in truth completes the whole In day or night her vigil keeps Until unsettled child sleeps No task required is ever too great No hour for nurturing too late At sounds of stirring I arise Until the tears’ last droplet dries And then I wait a little spell To see her safe and warm and well Before I lay my weary head Upon the softness of my bed Elizabeth Santos |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Elizabeth....great job. I know these happenings well. seems just like yesterday...mine just got home..enjoyed the memories you gave back to me alan |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh Elizabeth ![]() touching this mommie's heart tonight ![]() thank you for this ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Just the loveliest of thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done my friend. . . a song to sing. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is so precious, Elizabeth. I'm not a mother yet, but I do love children. Just beautiful. ![]() God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments Liz ... a mother's song is sweet indeed, you've captured this wonderfully. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and this beauty is inspired by a Grandmothers love... a lovely intend Liz...tender and touching. Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
My son and his wife will be having a baby in December...so I will be a grandfather at last...James |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
What a wonderful loving tribute from a very lucky child's mother. |
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