Open Poetry #16 |
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Awakened Hurricane |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada ![]() |
AWAKENED HURRICANE I feel it when I start to grow power swirling around Taking a breath I taste the thrill when I become a sound Stretching out I join in the dance drawing all into me The tempo builds as passions flow alive for all to see My voice screams as the air ignites leaving calm center core Building I spread with increased speed driving close to your shore Shattering all that's in my path for this is my domain Warnings go out to make aware AWAKENED HURRICANE Karen Torbiak 2001© |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Having one of those days of power, hey? Well done! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! I really like this. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karin, Well blow me down I'll have to get out of your way. Enjoyed the read |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i'm runnin outta the way of this thrill o' a poem |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Startime....as usual...another one of your magnificent poems that you graciously share with all of us. You post awesome words. Thank You. |
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