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.........Paradise Kiss.......
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Paradise Kiss  With my soul in your hand here, I stand naked before you yet, fully clothed, I used to be so terrified to let my true self dance with romance to show my vulnerability and love completely... until you When your eyes smile, layers unfold, you see beauty where I saw scars and I feel sexy...a polished gem, everything you are... seduces me I soar into your arms, swim within your charms, you are my reverie... my constant melody, my splendor of everlasting bliss found in the power of just one kiss I look in your eyes and there, I see all that was meant to be, I've loved you since I was born and many lifetimes before, you are my everything, my everafter of Spring... you are my rhapsody of love our souls blend together like hand in fated glove and my heart merges with yours in the peace of just one kiss Setting passion afire you kindle my desire as your electric lips paint kisses across my face... falling into each other I see love, I feel love, I taste love... we are love Every glimpse of Nirvana, every promise of heaven shines in your eyes and the world becomes mine when our bodies entwine through paradise 'neath the smile of the envious moon, you leave me breathless with your caress, you take me to ecstasy everytime in your kiss and I feel like a queen through colours of dream I look in your eyes and I see...all that was meant to be, here, now and always you are my inspiration...my light, this moment is not in our hands 'tis destiny of God's plan, you are my soulmate, my faithful friend, my one true lover No matter how simple or lavish the Eden which surrounds... just kiss me and hold me and paradise shall live forever By Melissa P. Monette |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Melissa!! Exquisitely beautiful, and the picture is perfect. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is truly heavenly writing. Absolutely gorgeous. I applaud you. Now on this beautiful note maybe I'll take me off to bed. I'm sure this will give me lovely dreams If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wowzers Melissa, this is the stuff dreams are made of, beautiful! ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
whoa...a truly passionate one  ~ cottage |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Whoa! I need a cold shower! Now i am off to work feeling all fuzzy and delicious! You are a genius of romantic poetry! This is exquisite, Melissa! Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, You write so exquisitely, I love this poem! LOVE LIVES and talks through the pen of Sweet Melissa! Write On Sister, Dennis :^) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Just kiss me and hold me and paradise shall live forever." This is a very substantial portrayal of the power of a kiss...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I soar into your arms, swim within your charms, you are my reverie... my constant melody, my splendor of everlasting bliss found in the power of just one kiss I look in your eyes and there, I see all that was meant to be, I've loved you since I was born and many lifetimes before, you are my everything, my everafter of Spring... you are my rhapsody of love our souls blend together like hand in fated glove and my heart merges with yours in the peace of just one kiss Setting passion afire you kindle my desire as your electric lips paint kisses across my face... falling into each other I see love, I feel love, I taste love... we are love =========================== You need to start your own line of romance and Valentines day card girlie... you rock  this is a passionate beauty Melis... love ya in love with love This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sigh... again you leave me speechless. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
all that in a kiss your heart must be full of love it flows from your pen Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I look in your eyes and there, I see all that was meant to be, Melissa, this poem is better than excellent! You have a wealth of wonderful lines and thoughts throughout the entire piece. You want my personal opinion?? It's dynamite!!!  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful words, Melissa! Cor |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . when you find that flow, you just don't let go of it do you?? this is wonderful. . . but, then again, you are the Queen of Romance. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big romantic sigh) Oh Melissa, you make my head spin and my heart beat faster in your beautiful words of true love! (smiles) This poem had me daydreaming of my dream girl I dream to love someday; this is sooooooooo romantic, I just have to give you this special kiss on your cheek! (muah) Thank you so much for your beautiful comment yesterday; you make me feel so special and I love you so much; for you and all my friends I'll stay here! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet honeybee, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Words dripping with sweet love and honey....this is passionate poetry at its best. You just keep letting these love poems flow, and we will keep on gobbling them up. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, Your writing simply gets more and more beautiful. I don't know what to say chickie. Romance is your thing Hugs, Tara  I need a darn quote. *chuckles* |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
um ok i love this! i do! can i have my $1 million now? hehehehe. seriously though, i can see why tara sez "this is us" hehe - you seem to have captured it exactly. wonderful! -Napalm I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!Now how did I miss this one? It has everything I love. Romance, passion and deep love and with a graphic to die for. BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Does "wow" work here, is that allowed? WOW!!! I loved every word of this. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone! Briefly, I was reading a magazine and came across a perfume ad (which is the graphic I use in my poem) and then the words flowed so fast, and this poem was born. It's funny how one picture can inspire so much, and I don't even have a boyfriend right now!~ Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, this is love at it's finest!, and that picture sizzles |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Melissa - Yikes!! This one is hot!! I really liked it. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a splendid poem...thank you for sharing your heart, Melybee... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Absolutely beautiful Melissa, I agree with Sven you are passions Queen of Romance! And not having boyfriend doesn't make any difference if you have a romantic heart!! Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Melissa..this is fantastic. I love the way you do romance. |
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