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my try at under 20 |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Into the twilight you whispered to my heart letting me know through space and time we are not apart ~*~ your soft touch came light upon the breeze I swear I heard your laughter in the rustle of leaves ~*~ feeling Fall falling free with your love surrounding me ~*~ ~SEA~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wonderfully romantic  I knew that you could do it perfectly, girl!  I need to try this! Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Melissa!! I'll be looking for yours  |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
As if we had need to worry... You teased and then pleased with these. All very nice, but this took one more step forward than the rest with me... "feeling Fall falling free with your love surrounding me" |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is beautiful SEA...great romance here... alan |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you I hope I did them right I like these I love Fall so that one was very me.... it's offically Fall on 9-22-01 @4:05 pm  |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
looks close enough to perfect for me... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
SEA, I don't know what the under 20 is about, but this was neatly done. Keth. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Fall has always been my favorite time of the year. There's something quite magical about it to me. This is pretty, Susan. Nice work, sweet friend (((hugs))))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"feeling Fall falling free with your love surrounding me" This is so delicate and tender ... just lovely Susan! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Into the twilight you whispered to my heart letting me know through space and time we are not apart ======================= softly spoken succinct perfection Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh SEA...you do these so well!! Enjoyed! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
looks like we all have our favourites...i liked the second one best.. i swear i heard your laughter in the rustle of leaves |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I like this one. Very good. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Geez, SEA, under twenty or over one hundred, your words flow like touching fine silk.you amaze me continuously on your skills..very gentle smile |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Excellent "try", you do them all well. Sandra |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Short and sweet and to the point. Love them, Sea. Dee |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
SEA, Despite that I am once again out of the loop and have no idea what you were suppose to do (20 or less?).. its a wonderful poem. Romantic.. sweet... you make incredable poetry look so easy TaraB |
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