Open Poetry #16 |
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A Time Of Silence |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida ![]() |
![]() A time of silence echoes in the rising mist the heart pales like a withering summer rose beneath the morning dew as visions of goodbye become a final curtain call glazed in clouds of remembrance of a certain smile, a certain touch carved deep in the stone of sorrows soul a secret prayer becomes the heartbeat of hope surely, one day we’ll study war no more but find peace on heavenly shores BloomingRose |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Very lovely write. ![]() ![]() ~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I think all of us are praying for that now. If only this world was a little more perfect it would be possible. All we can do is pray and keep our faith strong. Thank you for sharing this beautiful heartfelt poem. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sunshine~ Thank you. Nice to have you send warm wishes for peace. Startime~ I agree, our country needs continual prayer. Keep the faith! |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
this is a very beautiful and touching poem. I've enjoyed it greatly. ~ cottage |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
We know that shores of peace are waiting there for us and that is certainly something to look forward to, but of course there are those that need one such as yourself to teach this to ......SOOOOOOOOO, you know what that means, don't ya. ![]() |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
when the streets are all lined with gold then whats there to fight for o yuh! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Deb, this is a lovely writing, your graphics do your words proud, and vice versa...thank you for this one... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Cottage~ Thank you, I am so glad you like this. Mark~ There you are my friend! Thank you so much for your kind reply. So now I am wondering where is your next poem???? Wayoutwalt~ Ahhhh... a place where there will be no shortage of glorius things, no reason to fight indeed! Thanks ![]() |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely done Deb...i pray all the time for peace... i think the whole world is going crazy..its terrible isnt it? enjoyed your poem..lovely ~Victoria~ |
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