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sunshinemist
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0 posted 2001-10-16 06:07 PM


Echoes

Echoes unfold
as sounds are known,
fields of gold
hum a soft tone.
***
Whisper in the air
a soft caress
leaves everywhere
the wind does possess.
***
Echoes in the hills
chant a lovely tune
call of the whipporwills
spring coming soon.
***
Song of the nightingale
its music does betray
howling a gastly tale
winter winds do relay.
***
Echoes...
listen for their call
swift as the hummingbird
soft as the nightfall.

~sunshinemist~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

© Copyright 2001 Marie. C. - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-16 06:21 PM


*sigh* sounds like a warm autumn evening to me. I could see it, feel it and hear it. Absolutely beautiful. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-10-16 06:26 PM


Very beautiful....echoes are truly neat to hear...a nice poem.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 10-16-2001).]

sunshinemist
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3 posted 2001-10-16 06:50 PM


Startime, thank you very much. Glad that you enjoyed it.   I really love natures sounds too.       ~hugs~

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Magnus, thank you so much for sharing the echoes with me.  
          ~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Duncan
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4 posted 2001-10-17 01:13 AM


Song of the nightingale
its music does betray
howling a gastly tale
winter winds do relay.

Great verse...great poem.

sunshinemist
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5 posted 2001-10-17 10:38 AM


Duncan, thank you kindly.   ~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Munda
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6 posted 2001-10-17 12:00 PM


What a wonderful poem. I enjoyed it much.  
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-10-17 12:39 PM


SunshineMist~

'Echoes...
listen for their call
swift as the hummingbird
soft as the nightfall.'


What a wonderful, wonderful thought~
Oh this is just so creatively lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

A Whisper's Caress
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8 posted 2001-10-17 12:47 PM


so so pretty.....

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

sunshinemist
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9 posted 2001-10-17 01:04 PM


Munda- thank you, glad that you enjoyed!  
          ~hugs Marie~

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Marge- thank you so very much for your wonderful comments. I appreciate them!         ~hugs Marie~

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Whispers caress- thank you kindly.  
           ~hugs~ Marie

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Larry C
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10 posted 2001-10-17 11:48 PM


sunshinemist,
Such wonderful images.  A sweet poem which I thoroughly enjoyed.  Thanks.

sunshinemist
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11 posted 2001-10-18 11:10 AM


Larry- thank you so much for the read and enjoying!         ~hugs Marie~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

vlraynes
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12 posted 2001-10-23 02:49 AM



sunshinemist-
   What a lovely write...much enjoyed.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

sunshinemist
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13 posted 2001-10-23 10:46 AM


Vickey,

Thank you kindly. So glad that you enjoyed it.  ......~hugs Marie~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

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