Open Poetry #16 |
- In Love With Love - |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
In Love With Love I want desire to pulse through my veins as I bathe in the ecstasy of Cupid's champagne I want to swim in the warm milk of chocolates and kiss eternal bliss in the soft summer rain I want my stomach to flutter with butterflies across the fields of forever and a day to see rainbows in your enchanting brown eyes and gather tears to water destiny's bouquet I want love, the very depths and heighth of it I want wedding bells to ring Eden's choir to sing, I need love, boundless, glorious love a confection of perfection... a sigh in which to fly to the very ends of the earth and lie 'neath the stars and gaze above to see God's smile shine on the wings of a dove, I want all that is pure and true all that is meant to be found within the soul of you a spiritual connection born of reverie... a selfless devotion a beautiful commotion beating within the promise of heart's poetry Together, we'll unlock the great mysteries of romance to stir the peaceful chime of winds and our laughter will summon roses to dance as our masterpiece of bond begins, and in the strength of your arms, I'll reach heaven as every moment will be so sweetly cliche then as angels we'll be in love with love a dream to flourish and never fade away By Melissa P. Monette "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ this is so beautiful |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Oh Melissa... now where did I leave the tissues? [This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 09-22-2001).] |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Beautifully written. I too am in love with love, and I think you expressed how I feel about love to the "t". |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Sorry, for posting again...I just wanted to add this to my library... As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And you should settle for nothing less this is wonderful Melis... destined to be a Valentine's day classic!! Hallmark Cards NEEDS you Well tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a true classic from The Queen of Romance. . . wonderfully done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Beautiful, Melissa |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, so lovely and heavenly! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yeah. I want that again too. Except the wedding bells ringing. Think I'll leave that part out next time!!! Beautiful poem. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* Geesh..you all have me sighing all over the place tonight. I LOVE this, and just remember to post it in February because it looks like it could be a wonderful Valentine's Day card! You have a wonderful way with your poetry, yanno? I'm always reading. Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Heavenly! You do write so beautifully! We incurable romantics never run out of poems to write about it! Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL MELISSA !! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
An excellent title and a beautifully written poem I am in love with your writing Liz |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much everyone! I'm a proud hopeless romantic still searching for "the one"; so, every once in a while I feel the need to write corny, lovey-dovey verse such as this "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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