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Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

0 posted 2001-10-16 12:08 PM

I wander from day to day
Like a ghost without substance,
Crying translucent tears
Which fall to the damp ground
And disappear at my feet.

There is an emptiness inside,
A void that you left behind;
Where my heart once beat
With such passionate rhythm,
There is now only silence,
Deafening in it's intensity,
Stealing the dreams we shared
And invading my restless mind
With nightmares of losing you.

Living in a netherworld of pain,
Not knowing what I did wrong;
Only knowing that I miss you.

Nothing left but perpetual night;
Without stars or silver moonlight,
And the only sounds I hear
Are the scraping of dead leaves
Tossed across the porch
By the cold November wind.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-10-16 12:41 PM

Oh Jonas, this is a sad but well written tune. I hope spring comes early for you, with new hope and less pain.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2001-10-16 12:47 PM

Well written sadness from the heart.
Winter brings cold and bitter days, but in due time there's spring and new things that burst forth with the joy of life.
May the warmth of hope birth in your heart.

Deb

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-10-16 12:51 PM

*sigh* even a cold november wind can sometimes bring with it refreshment of the spirit. I hope the warmth of love fills your life soon. *hugs* and don't forget the magic that comes with Christmas snow. Maybe there will be magic in it for you this year. Very heartfelt poem. Take care.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

4 posted 2001-10-16 12:53 PM

I like this. Nice sound...rhythm. Thank you. Bob

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-10-16 01:13 PM

Jonas,
Well written enjoyed the read.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2001-10-16 01:22 PM

Been there done that my friend...well written.

jwesley

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2001-10-16 03:44 PM

Sad indeed! ((Hugging Jonas))
Was this written about who I think it was??
I'm not miss cleo but I see a new love coming into your life soon. : )

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2001-10-16 03:49 PM

Jonas, I can feel your pain. Oh, and the scraping of the dead leaves across the porch!It chills me to the bone. Well done!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Jonas
Senior Member

since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

9 posted 2001-10-16 04:01 PM

Thank you for the incredible responses everyone

The encouragement here is overwhelming.

RosePetal - Yes, this is about who you think it's about....but it's okay. I wrote this last year during a bad time. I am okay now and enjoying being unattached again

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