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LoveLetters
Junior Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 35
State of Hope

0 posted 2001-10-16 02:58 AM

Obsession steals sleep
Regret flutters in darkness
Still he dreams no less
*****
Moments now quiver
A hush of breath answers words
Grasping love breaks free
*****

There is something written in the wind tonight again.
The words are too small, but I know their presence.
They whittle away my doubts and carve love.

Love has many masks. I am but one of them.

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

1 posted 2001-10-16 06:34 AM

These may be smaller things .......but they cover a pretty big topic in a very concise but powerful way.......nicely written

Stay warm

Jon

WRBreezin
Member

since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

2 posted 2001-10-16 07:38 AM

Precious intent, in each line...clearly understood.

Willie B

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-10-16 08:57 AM

LoveLetters~
This is lovely~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-10-16 09:51 AM

*sigh* not small at all but filled with tender romance. This is very beautiful and I love the feeling it gives. Very well done. Thank you.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

5 posted 2001-10-16 10:05 AM

It is well you listen to the wind...it tells us many things, when we take care to feel them...

Kelley_Edwards
Junior Member

since 2001-10-16

Posts 21
USA

6 posted 2001-10-16 10:46 AM

Sometimes the smaller things are more important than the larger, since they are also the seeds that help it grow...very nice!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2001-10-16 01:29 PM

Nice, and warm...lovely write...

jwesley

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2001-10-16 02:03 PM

I love those little words that whittle.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2001-10-16 02:09 PM

All three...very delicate and lovely! Enjoyed!!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-10-16 06:32 PM

shhhh. . . I believe that there will be more. . .

well done. . .

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