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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-10-15 10:00 PM



Angel

Sweet Karilea
your heavenly heart sings forth
through your endless quill
our miracle, our angel
you fill our souls with sunshine



By Melissa P. Monette


© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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1 posted 2001-10-15 10:02 PM


A nice tribute to a wonderful person.
Martie
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2 posted 2001-10-15 11:21 PM


How beautiful, Melissa...she will love this!
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3 posted 2001-10-16 01:32 AM


What an absolutely beautiful tribute to our Sunshine Angel, and she is indeed.  A lovely tanka Melissa, and a beautiful picture as well.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

BloomingRose
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4 posted 2001-10-16 09:02 AM


Very pretty. Can't resist angel poems, and this one really is lovely!

Deb  

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5 posted 2001-10-16 12:52 PM


Melissa,
very nice tribute! I love the picture!
Cindi

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6 posted 2001-10-16 01:09 PM


Melissa,
She'll love it.

Chelsea~
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7 posted 2001-10-17 11:57 AM


missy,

you are the most
generous person
i know!  this is
so nice

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8 posted 2001-10-17 12:08 PM


Sunshine the angel
yet a heavenly body
how to reconcile
just take a ray of sunlight
mix with poetic talent

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2001-10-17 12:17 PM


This IS Karilea
She does fill us with sunshine
A sweet message to a wonderful and prolific poetess.
Thanks for this lovely tribute
Liz

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10 posted 2001-10-17 01:03 PM



Melybee....how kind of you to rain sun on my day...with angels, no less!  I collect them, you know...they are all around me....

but never so many as here at Passions!  

Thank you so very much for this lovely, lovely Tanka!  Into my library, and under a spotlight!

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11 posted 2001-10-17 01:48 PM


Melissa, very beautiful tribute to Sunshine!  Enjoyed!   `hugs~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

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12 posted 2001-10-17 10:28 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Your beautiful angelic words spread sunshine to our sweet sunshine of Passions! (smiles) She is such a  beautiful angel, just like you! (smiles) Your beautiful words are again inspiring me to write! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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13 posted 2001-10-17 11:32 PM


A wonderful tribute to a very deserving lady. I love this masterpiece of verse.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Honeybee
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14 posted 2001-10-18 12:07 PM



Thank you everyone for your replies  

Karilea is so special, and I'm so glad that many of you feel the same way about her as I do!  

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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