Open Poetry #16 |
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Interlude 4-The Face of the Goddess |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
![]() the High Priestess peers out from her hiding place, seeing that they have gone, she steps out, her temple, once proud and glorious, the jewel of the city, now lay in ruins around her the flames still burning, the dust not settled, they had destroyed it she walked into the heart of the temple to the shrine of the Goddess they have defiled it, smashed everything, pieces strewn here and there, and then, she saw the head the head of the one she was called to serve whom she had served since she was a young girl she had followed the Way of the Goddess her whole life growing in strength and in wisdom these were the gifts of the Goddess and they were the gifts that she shared with those that came to worship so that they too might come to know the Goddess as she did as a source of light as a source of love as a source of comfort now, they would come no more for there was nothing to come to they came in the night hundreds of them, screaming and yelling they broke through the temple gates and began their plan of destruction she could hear their screams mingling with the sounds of her fellow priestesses they were being slaughtered their crime? only that of worshipping her name and so, she hid and prayed that she would be protected that they wouldn’t find her lest she suffer the same terrible fate why had they come? what had she done to deserve this? she later learned that they had come “in the name of God” and that since he alone was God all other gods were to be destroyed along with those that followed them she wondered why any god would demand such a thing of his followers the Goddess’ only demand was that her followers live in peace and harmony with all life, and with each other nothing more and so, as she wept in front of the face of her Goddess, her soul’s love she knew that even though they had destroyed her temple building they would never destroy the temple of her heart Art: The Face of the Goddess --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 10-15-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Because we ARE the temple, yes? I was looking forward to this one, Sven...thank you! When I quit running around like mad will send you some interesting biblical references to just this very thing...some from the apocryphy and and from the pseudepigraphia! Interesting tale, well told! |
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Rose Unicorn New Member
since 2001-10-15
Posts 7GA, USA |
I like it just as it is...quite moving. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
AMEN....this is superb....A goddess is always a good thing to write of...thanx Sven. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
What a sad tale! I felt her pain, grief and bewilderment, as though I too were standing there with her! But we in the know, know that the Goddess is not dead and gone, but alive in all of us..... Moving Sven, thankyou... Isis *The greatest warrior is one that does not need to fight* ~Isis~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sven, your poems are always an inspiration... Beautiful writing, dear friend... ~Tier |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, thank you. . . I knew that you would like this one. . . just came to me in a flash today. . . and I will be waiting for those notes. . . thanks!! ![]() Rose Unicorn, thank you for reading. . . and welcome to Passions!! Magnus, thank you my friend, I am indeed finding this out. . . ![]() Isis, she indeed is in us all . . . thank you my friend. . . Tier, I am honored to be an inspiration to you my friend. . . thank you. . . ![]() --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Deeply moving Sven...I felt the darkness and the dishonor of her heart. So sad...and yet she (Our inner Goddess) still lives. Wonderful poetry! Sincerely, Regina |
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