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His Love
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His Love |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
His Love His love is like a soft warm breeze on a summers day drifting endlessly among the trees, their branches softly sway. ~*~ His love is like a mountain so high up in the shy where man can only wonder and birds never fear to fly. ~*~ His love is like a mighty storm that rages in the night the lightning and the thunderbolts against a dark, dark sky. ~*~ His love is as gentle as a butterflys wings brushing softly on your cheek, and gently flies away, for others do they seek. ~*~ His love is as peaceful as a summer rain shower soft and tender droplets upon my face or upon a beautiful flower. ~*~ His love has so many facets like a diamond sparkling in the light, a love that's everlasting and free, a love that could only be ment for me. ~sunshinemist~ (c)2001Marie C. smiles ~Marie~ |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Marie!! This was so beautifully written...the images you've penned are wonderful, like the swaying tree branches! Hold onto his love : ) If he knows what's good for him he will never fly away! |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
RosePetal, thank you so much for your lovely comments. I do think that he knows.  ~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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