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Open Poetry #16

Flowers

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-10-15 10:06 AM

So many flowers up
On top of the hill.
Usually sunflowers,
Like the year before.
Knowing they will rebloom
Inch by inch getting taller.
Saving all of these flowers
So I will have them all year.
Eventually the flowers will all
Die.
© By Sue 7/30/01

But, some will come back next year.

P.S. this was an acrostic challenge I did.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-15 10:09 AM

BRAVO!!!!Magnificent. I love it!!!Your words sing wonderfully.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2001-10-15 10:17 AM

Thank you, Startime.

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

3 posted 2001-10-15 10:59 AM

Good challange and nicely done!

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-10-16 10:01 PM

This is clever and well done. I enjoyed the message.

Sincerely,
Regina

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2001-10-16 10:43 PM

Not sure about what an acrostic is (forget evertime I learn) but neat write, nice images too.

jwesley

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