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No One Can Compare
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? 
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No One Can Compare Remember when we met a few years ago, I was new to t-ville, someone you didn’t know, Who knew that our friendship would survive long enough to grow? No one thing can compare to the time we shared, Things that occur like this are rare, Appearing out of thin air, Only assuring us that we are a perfect pair. I only pour my heart out to a few individuals, Usually it’s the paper and the pen that know my real issues, Telling you my every thoughts and wishes seems like a ritual. Those weekends at the inn, I never wanted to end, You want to know the reasons why .. Where do I begin? IM not perfect, but you treat me the same as if I was flawless. Spending time with you just makes things better Because Im with you, You satisfy me with everything you do, Bonds as strong as this aren’t made with glue. Only true hearts & feelings have that kind of seal, Name another duo other than us who keep it this real. We’ve came too far to let each other go, although it was I who did the releasing, Never once did my feelings for you start decreasing. As for breaking your heart that time, my timing couldn’t have been worse, But like you said, “it would have been handled better if I explained the situation first.” I told you over and over it was not anything you did, I broke it off just so I could see my kid. Since your heart was broken by me, Here.. take the one inside of me… it basically belongs to you, Seeing how much I put you through. No one can compare to you, Remember last night on the porch, sitting there and the things I was telling you. These past few weeks take me back to memories of when you used to live on White St., Complete, That is how I felt all week. IM so lucky, but still I feel so sad, Not sad like remorse, But because it took me 2 times to run this course. There is not another female who could take your place…… Since you left… all that’s left is an empty space |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
GhostWriter_6, The truth is out there now. Hope everything is okay. Intense feelings nicely expressed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'll be honest, even if it hurts. This one left a lump in my throat. I hope that she will come back again, for number three. I can feel your pain in this one, and there isn't anything I can say that would make it any less painful an experience. Hang in there, time may still be on your side. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 10-15-2001).] |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Awww babyboy, I felt your pain on this one. This one's going in the library. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I felt the pain and longing here... Hope she comes back. Maree  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such pain fills your words. I know the feeling well. I pray that the love you desire fills your heart and heal the pain you are no eduring. My heart goes out to you. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh, she sounds so wonderful, and you sound so wonderful together. I hope it all works out for the two of you. May love keep you together If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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