Open Poetry #16 |
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The Starlight Cafe |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia ![]() |
The Starlight Cafe The name was Starlight Cafe The corner table we chose Silver goblets,a carafe of wine In your hand you held a rose Placed the rose into my hand To the corner we both glance Piano playing love melodies Embraced we began to dance Swaying close togetherness My ears you nibble and bite Stroked by your tender hands Danced emblazoned in starlight Stars shone through windows Silver rays shone from above We wined, dance and danced Lips whispering words of love Hope |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well, if that's not the perfect date... You wrote it well. |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Sounds like a lovely time at the Starlight Cafe! I liked this. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I think I need to go to that cafe. Is there an extra corner table???? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm going there as soon as you reveal the location...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
James it in Perth Western Australia , it overlooks the ocean , a perfect way to view the sunset Hope |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
If I should ever get to Australia, I'm searching out this cafe. You make it sound so beautiful If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romantic perfection is pen in this vision of love. Hope, you weave love with such beauty making the heart yearn to have this kind of love in my life. Very well done. A romantic beginning to my day. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ Such a lovely romantic write~ *sigh* ... beautifully done~ *hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
visual images were wonderful on this! ![]() -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Hope - this is as graceful as a waltz. I like it!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it is a nice thought o yuh |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Hope, I don't remember this cafe from when I was in Perth. I will have to look for it next time I am over there. You have made me want to visit again. Dee |
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