Open Poetry #16 |
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Dessert |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Dessert Imagine that life is much more then just good or bad. Today you may be happy and tomorrow may find you sad. My life is a collection of interwoven experiences some I want to forget and some I remember well. Relationships that seemed to pass and some doomed to fail. After all is said and done I find my life has been boring at times and others times full of fun. Life is to live and love, to laugh and cry, to give to partake to hesitate, to suffer and die. Yes sometimes life really seems to be full of hurt and other times in moments of pleasure we need to take the time to enjoy dessert. JamesLee October14 2001 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 10-14-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll come to the banquet of dessert...every now and then, we must indulge in the goodness of life... well done, jamesmichael... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I liked this, But I believe it could be better If in little bites, Example: Life is to live and love, to laugh and cry, to give to partake to hesitate, to suffer and die. could be Life is to live and love, to laugh and cry, to give to partake to hesitate, to suffer and die. putting line breaks were natural pauses might be. Just a friendly observation. Gloom |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you so much Sunshine and Professor...I agree and made those changes...James |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yesh... living life to the fullest includes leaving room for dessert. The main course is not always everything exciting. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* Life is a banquet that is spread before us to be enjoyed. I have had lots of bad in my life but I have also not lived a boring life. Take for example: the time I was chased by a tank ![]() ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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