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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-10-13 10:54 PM

Why? Why must I sit, waiting for you to come?
How many beats of my heart must my soul endure?
What keeps my touch from experiencing your softness?
I wait.

I think of this morning, of the warmth of you beside me.
I still smell the fragrance on a lonely pillow next to mine.
A single hair left unconsciously, calls me to be touched.
Your toothbrush, wet, says you have been here.

Lipstick on a glass, fingerprints of two hands, wine shared.
Ashes of a roaring fire, kindling the desires we had.
Lace panties lying beside a bath, knowingly left behind.
My mind sizzles with the thought of each moment.
Sleek curves made for racing, for lingering on at each stop.
I wish to race again.

I wait for the door to smoothly open with a whisper.
I yearn for the feel of your hand in mine.
I taste the softness of your kiss, lingering.
You have left a trail of love in my heart. I’m lost.

I watch a blank television screen, my finger will not move.
I hear only your sighs whispering in my ears.
My tongue torments me without your taste.
My hunger grows within my every cell.

Do you understand who you are to me?
Can you ever know how much you have affected my life?
Will you always in my life be?
Can I hold in my arms this night?

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-10-13 10:57 PM

This is so well expressed, if only you knew how it speaks of my yearning right now!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-10-13 10:58 PM

*OH MY GOSH* this lady has a real treasure in you, Magnus. Your words set the body, heart, mind and soul on fire with a passionate longing and desire. This poem is from the heart of a master romantic. I LOVE IT!!!VERY LUCKY LADY INDEED.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-10-13 10:59 PM

Melissa....I do understand....otherwise I
would not write these words with so much
feelings that can be enjoyed as much as
I do writing them

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-10-13 11:03 PM

Startime.....my goodness...another lady with
a romantic flare...pouncing upon my poetic
words with so much that I love to read...
Thanx for your comments....love them all.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-10-13 11:05 PM

Magnus! Oh...*sigh*...you know what your romantic writing does to me!!
~Warm Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-10-13 11:08 PM

Yes Nancy,,,,,your desire does so much inspire. I love to write words that others
can enjoy...thank you

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

7 posted 2001-10-13 11:12 PM

Oh God, yes, (sorry) couldn't stop my fingers from typing that!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-10-13 11:15 PM

gee...your fingers seem to have the same
problems mine do at times....romance does
that to me...fumble fingers....Thank you
very much....glad you like these poems.

You write very well yourself and I am
enjoying your poetry too.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

9 posted 2001-10-13 11:44 PM

How romantic. Beautiful words for a beautiful feeling, that of being in love and waiting the hours until we see them again.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-10-14 12:03 PM

"Sleek curves made for racing, for lingering on at each stop.
I wish to race again."

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"You have left a trail of love in my heart. I’m lost."

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I liked this very much, these lines were the best though

made for some big smiles and sighs

seems you've set the hearts of the PiP women all a flutter

and with this gorgeous romantic poetry, its too easy to see why

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

11 posted 2001-10-14 01:33 AM

Yep...this is It, Mag!

All of the longing the bliss the feeling of something missing and I did love THIS line:

"My tongue torments me without your taste."

Absolutely beautiful.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-10-14 07:36 AM

Thanx Susan....I warned you that I enjoy this
style of writing....I am happy that you are
enjoying my posts....And I have enjoyed
your poetry as well. Thank you.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2001-10-14 07:37 AM

Tracey....those hours can be so tormentingly long. Thank you.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2001-10-14 07:39 AM

Gosh,,,,,I can't think of a return pun....
No need...I am happy that you enjoy my
words...That gives my heart much joy.
Thank you Serenity.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

15 posted 2001-10-14 08:00 AM

What an emotive write Magnus! The wonderful imagery still plays in my mind. You've captured this feeling so perfectly ... truly a beautifully romantic read, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2001-10-14 08:10 AM

Thank you Kit....I try to make the words
as I see them in my mind....you cannot
enjoy what you cannot see or relate to.

Thanx again....and congrats on your number
of posts that you made....that is awesome.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

17 posted 2001-10-15 08:14 AM

I can only think of one word to reply to this, Magnus....YES!

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2001-10-15 08:20 AM

Feelings and desires all over this one...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2001-10-15 07:30 PM

Dee.....did it just happen again....your name?

I am tickled that you are enjoying these posts.

I will be posting another on the adult site soon....IT is a nice one also.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

20 posted 2001-10-15 07:31 PM

Thanx James.....I am glad some of the guys
like them as well.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

21 posted 2001-10-15 11:44 PM

Nice and romantic...You can hold me in your arms : ) hehe

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