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Electric Touch
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Electric Touch Such gentle light shines from within your eyes Warmth of love flowing freely from your gaze The sparkle of flame showing me the prize Lost from the moment, a look, to you I raise The deepness of your voice caresses me A symphony played on harp and cello This blending in sweet, perfect harmony Tones created both vibrant and mellow I awake gasping from this dream of you Where waves of heat burn me to my core Wishing the depths of my love you knew Sending me into flights of love, I soar Craving your electic touch of desire I close my eyes still burning with love's fire Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Startime....guessing from your beautiful photo....you are obviously a sensual lady. For you write very sensual poetry.....I love reading this....soft but soooooo sensuous. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is delicately sensual. *Sighs* where can I get some of this?   where's shawn green when I need him! LOL Well expressed, Karen! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 10-13-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully expressed. Enjoyed. ~NancyLee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How gentle, how touching, how sweet. I awake gasping from this dream of you Where waves of heat burn me to my core Wishing the depths of my love you knew Damn it, why do we have to wake up??!! Dreamland is so pretty If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Startime, This is just lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
beautifully charged!!!!! This is for you!  -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Magnus.....like you, I have a love for both reading and writing love poetry. I am very glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you. Melissa.....*grin* gosh if I knew where to find it I wonder if I would just be writing it. I am searching just like you. I hope someday both our dreams come true. Hugs NancyLee....Thank you so much for your comment...It touches me deeply coming from one I admire so much. Tracey....hey, I am with you.....maybe if we didn't have to wake up the dream would become real. Thank you for commenting. Chris.....thank you, so much. I am so glad you enjoyed it. The Lady Of Shallot....Oh my gosh....thank you so much.....do you mind if I put it at my website? It is so very beautiful. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. *BIG HUGS* Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
Oh I really love this poem, rhythmic and sensual  cottage |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Love, Life, and Passion...certain in each line. Lovely intent. Willie B |
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