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Love So True
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Love So True |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Love So True How do I compare th love you give to me? Words are not enough for the beauty I see. ~*~ You notice things in me I thought were tucked away your enchanting smile can brighten my day. ~*~ Even a sunset as it comes into view could never declare your love for me so true. ~*~ You capture my soul with charm so unique caressing me with wonder and leaving me weak. ~*~ I'm thankful for the day you fell in love so true because that was the day... I fell in love with you. ~sunshinemist~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Oh my gosh, what the perfect declaration of love for your sweet love! (big hugggssssss) The day he fell in love with you will always be the happiest day of his life just as it does for you! (smiles) I love it, sweet Marie! (cheers in delight) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Noah, thank you so much for the read and your sweet comments. Love is grand!!  smiles ~Marie~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Marie, tender and lyrical. ~Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Nancy, thank you kindly.  ~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Marie, how very lovely..very gentle smile, he is lucky indeed |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Always a pleasure to read a poem like this Very nice Marie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely poetry...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sigh* YOu have a way with this subject, you know? I love your work. Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Marie ... this is absolutely delightful! Beautifully expressed, very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Logan- thank you! I think he knows how lucky he is, I know that I do. ~~~~~ Rex-thank you, so glad that you enjoyed. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ James- thank you kindly! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Vanda, thank you so much. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Temptress, I really appreciate your kind words. I do love to write about Love. ~warm hugs and love to you all~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Kit- Thank you so much for your nice comments. Glad that you enjoyed. ~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* wonderful. You write of love with beauty and tenderness. These words are a delight to the senses. I love it. Indeed they are filled with Love So True. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Startime- thank you so much for your lovely comments. Love sure is a special thing of beauty. ~hugs~smiles ~Marie~ |
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