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Each Night I Hold Her Hand
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Each Night I Hold Her Hand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Each Night I Hold Her Hand It was on an ebony night I walked beneath a moonless sky Engrossed within a mind of flight That lit a path for you and I. It’s true it was an aisle of wile But it held me a willing host And played its beauty mile on mile. A phantom holding you a ghost And happily I held your hand And walked with you within this space Above the timeless passing sand Within a dreamers dreaming grace My heart was warm my soul at peace I did not wish the wile to fade I did not wish to end the lease I would remain this heavens glade. But life is not all dreamers’ dawn And sun does light the true of morn. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Good Morning, Sy! Thank you for this! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Good morning Sunshine, thank you for shining this morning. *L* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely said....well written...I enjoyed this very much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Mangus. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Absolutely beautiful Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soft, lovely and dreamy! Beautifully expressed, Sy! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ This is so gracefully lovely~ You have a way of lighting even a moonless night~ BEAUTIFUL phrasing of your thoughts~ *Hugs* Love ya'  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It was on an ebony night I walked beneath a moonless sky Engrossed within a mind of flight That lit a path for you and I. =========================== And happily I held your hand And walked with you within this space Above the timeless passing sand Within a dreamers dreaming grace My heart was warm my soul at peace I did not wish the wile to fade I did not wish to end the lease I would remain this heavens glade. But life is not all dreamers’ dawn And sun does light the true of morn. ====================================== oh my...oh *sigh* ... OH Sy  And upon the morning sun's silent rise I saw the kindness shining in your eyes It matters not dark of night or light of day when minds entwine ... the dream does stay On sands of serenity we walk your beaches of understand Time is lost to infinity when we hold our hearts in our hands  I found this picture weeks ago and tucked it away for I knew eventually you would give me a chance to share it.... serendippity me sweet Stinky...minds entwined *winkiewinkie* me[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 10-13-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Sweet poetess, thank you. Sy Denise, My heart felt thanks. *L* Marge, You're all heart. Love and kisses. Sy JM, You stay and will always be my Tinkerbell. Love Sy |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is so beautfiul....it has a soft melody all its own....  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Nice comment thank you for the read. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romance just flows from your pen. This is gentle and filled with soft romance to set any heart beating faster. I love it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you so much Startime |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is so beautiful I had to read it twice before I even responded. I absolutely love it! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is a delightful poem. I really like the way you captured the moment: "It was on an ebony night I walked beneath a moonless sky Engrossed within a mind of flight That lit a path for you and I" It is so beautifully written, with a pleasant flow. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is amazingly tender and touching. Dreams are so sweet, sometimes we just don't want to wake up. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Just came by ... for one more sigh ... 'Tis time to lay down my weary head Tonite let me dream ... this rhyme scheme dream ... Let me have visions of Eden and Heaven instead Close your eyes and take my hand as we walk the moonlit shore Dreams come true as a butterfly and dragon stroll upon beaches of evermore *winkiewinkie*...goodnight Sweet Stinky sweet dreams  This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
This is going straight into my library! I love it Sy! You have my hand to hold : ) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tennessee, Thank you for the beautiful. Midnitesun, Thank you for the sweet comment. Tracey, Thats true and thank you. JM, Who's hand did you think I was holding? Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. RosePetal, Thank you sweet rose. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--Whoever walks the path of night reverie with you, would be in good hands. Lovely poem! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I so enjoyed this beautiful phrasing Sy .... such romantic and flowing sentiments, a wonderful read. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh darn...I have to come back tonight again, as any time I end a poem with a huge contented sigh, that is a "night" poem! Oh this was so beautiful, and I will be back later when the sun goes down. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo romantic, sweet Seymour! (sigh) To tread on the heavens just by holding her hand is the most beautiful feeling! (sigh) Love fills your sweet heart always, dear friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, You are a lover. *L* Kit, This from a poetess of your abilities is like a spoon of honey. *L* Mysteria, The best time to read romance is in the evening. *L* Noah, And may love and light always shine upon you! *L* |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Magical! How we could all dance in that realm of yours that makes you write like this. Precious moments! Keeping this one close by. Sincerely, Regina |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
This was a beautiful write. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
you take a moment, then intertwine all loving hearts when you call her "mine" saved but for the woman whose art stole away your loving heart |
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