navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #16 » I Want A Girl
Open Poetry #16
Post A Reply Post New Topic I Want A Girl Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-10-13 08:02 AM


I Want A Girl

I want a girl who wears red lingerie
but takes it off right away.
I want a girl with silky skin
and black or blue hair
wearing green or purple underwear.
I want a girl that doesn't know how to quit
packing big puffy lips and nice rounded hips.
I want a girl so big she pops her bra
so small she's only five or six feet tall.
I want a girl that wears a pout
but kisses til her lips wear out.
I want a girl that knows what she wants
with guys like me to fill her thoughts.
I want a girl that doesn't mess around
just once in my life I want a girl
that wants to stick around.

JamesLee
October13
2001

© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
jonmcm
Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222
England
1 posted 2001-10-13 08:42 AM


James, This made me laugh a lot!

I hope you find your hearts desire, what a woman she would be! lol

Jon  

[This message has been edited by jonmcm (edited 10-13-2001).]

SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
2 posted 2001-10-13 11:44 AM


the ending got me right in the heart......awww, James......
WindWalker
Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

3 posted 2001-10-13 12:17 PM


This was a good read!!!!!!!!!
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2001-10-13 02:53 PM


JamesMichael - keep plugging James, you're due...

BC

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
5 posted 2001-10-13 03:17 PM


*grin* sounds like you want a girl like women want a man. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I am sure all your dreams will come true and you will find the girl you are looking for.
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2001-10-13 03:34 PM


Well, I have been known to have blue hair (check out my homepage) and as for the bra??? sigh...I suppose anything is possible if I could find one small enough! I guess it's what I deserve tho, I always did say that size DOES matter!  

Thanks for the giggle...and much luck to you!

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
7 posted 2001-10-13 03:37 PM




(giggles) Soooooo cute and catchy this poem is! (smiles) Yep, I want a girl so very much too, and I just know you will find the girl of your dreams and you will always be happy together! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Domzi
Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288
New York (BK)
8 posted 2001-10-15 03:57 PM


Wow, I hope you find this girl of yours.
Cute poem!

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Nightshade
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
9 posted 2001-10-15 04:46 PM


Well now !! You're certainly not asking for much are you?!! Good one. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

walker
Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
10 posted 2001-10-15 04:54 PM


Good luck, I'm sure you'll find her.
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
11 posted 2001-10-15 05:07 PM


James!! I am so confused now!!  
You named so many different things that my head is spinning!     It's only Monday and so hard to get into the thinking mode, ya know?...oh my head!!  Hope you find her and soon!  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
12 posted 2001-10-16 03:05 AM


Thank you Jon, Sea, windWalker, Bill, Startime, Serenity, Noah, Domzi, Chris, walker and Nancy...
I think the point is that I like so many different things about women that it is hard for me to pinpoint exactly what I like...how many times have I thought wow this is the ultimate girl and then I notice another one and I realize that variety is the spice of life...no wonder they call them Spice Girls..
but the final line says it all....I want a girl that wants me...James

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818
USA
13 posted 2001-10-16 05:33 PM


you are so sweet!  Some girl is going to be very lucky (if she isn't already)

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-
Anna

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #16 » I Want A Girl

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary