Open Poetry #16 |
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In twilight majesty |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Do not forget my life as this turns to dust as the feelings erode at the changes we lost Do not forget my love as this turns to night as the covers are cold at the next days light do not forget my soul as the wind takes away as the stars cry out at heavens last game do not forget my eyes as they turn to the ground as they are covered for good from the sights they have found. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
your work is stunning....be well Peace... Greeneyes~ *** I keep my ideals, |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a good read!!!!!!!!! |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Another good one, Michael. Especially this: "do not forget my eyes as they turn to the ground as they are covered for good from the sights they have found." |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A little different form for you in this one. Short, easy words not to mention the rhyme....fantastic. But don't think for one moment that Passions is letting you go THAT easily. LOL Me It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Well, there is not a thing you have ever written that I haven't liked........but I loved the simplicity of this one..... As Always Jenn E |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A nice piece that certainly attracts with its simplicity. And We won't forget .... ![]() Thank you *************************** |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how could you be forgotten when you write so well. This is a wonderful read. Very heartfelt. |
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