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Open Poetry #16

You make me happy

Hardkore
Junior Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 33
San DIego, California

0 posted 2001-10-12 04:16 PM

One vine lies
Solitary
Beside
The wall
Slowly
Inch by inch
It crawls

Rarely seen,
Brillint
shades
of green,
a beautiful
view
Nothin
though
compared
to you

Passion fuels my love
Passion becomes consumed by my love
Without my love I become passionless

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-12 04:19 PM

Very nice...floated on it's own like a leaf down the page....well said. ~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-10-12 04:25 PM

Simple but very powerful, nice read.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

3 posted 2001-10-12 08:09 PM

Cool description of a wonderful feeling.

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