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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? 
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Issues I know it is hard being 19, But I got more issues than a subscription to a magazine. My relationship, Sinking like that titanic ship, Lost at sea, Don’t know if our relationship will last till my son turn 3. I can’t make myself be happy, The problems I try to rise above, But the ball and chain Around my leg is snug. Keeping me from flying above the obstacles at hand, My hourglass is down to its last grain of sand. My life.... For it I have no plans. Plain and simple, my future looks grim...... [This message has been edited by GhostWriter_6 (edited 10-12-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
"But I got more issues than a subscription to a magazine." a Grand metaphor! This is a marvelous bit of writing! Keep it up! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Oh yuh I hear you and echo Lady for my favorite line. |
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