Open Poetry #16 |
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Time To Rest |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas ![]() |
I. An energetic child always goes to sleep; Can’t choose the hour, but rest assured of exhaustion’s constant creep. II. Across the setting sun, tired dust drifts to darkness. The month of rain is past, no more evening circus shows nor summer’s broken hearts; The brilliant yellow flower’s gone. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved your sentiments in this piece Topheth ... beautiful phrasing, much enjoyed! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for sharing this with us, I really enjoyed the read. The way you phrased everthing had a magical quality to it that made me want to read more. ![]() Zu "Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Jeph, Very well done. Enjoyed! Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jeph~ ![]() "nor summer’s broken hearts; The brilliant yellow flower’s gone." this part is so gorgeous and sad all at once.I really like this ![]() "One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Thank you each for your kind comments. I hope to find a pleasant stretch of free time this weekend and get back here to what I enjoy. |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well then, big brown eyes ![]() ![]() |
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