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Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2001-10-12 01:33 AM

Hello, folks! I'm back to bless y'll with another one...I hope y'll like it....peace!

Baby, please don't cry,
please dry those tears,
from your precious eyes

because one day,
we all will die

just remember that, our spirits
will always fly and grace the sky
as I could be, that beautiful butterfly

that circles you before it flutters by,
or the man in the moon, that winks his eye

so my sweetie, I'll see you in heaven,
as my heart, beats its' last beat
when my ship sinks in lifes' vast sea,

when the last tear falls from me,
when my last days are no longer sunny,

when the last rhyme fades from my mind,
hopping God forgive me for my past crimes
as I tell the world goodbye, one last time,

as my body gets cold like wintertime
as life and death modes intertwine....

and I'll see you in heaven,
when the walls around my heart falls
and God sends the angels to call,

but just remember, that before the sky falls
from the bottom of my heart, I gave you my all

and I'll see you in heaven,
when the last bit of air frees my lungs,
when the last word or phrase, leaves my tongue,

when my body disinergrates to dust,
as I silently cry, in god we trust....

Nathan

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 10-12-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-12 01:46 AM

Nate~ this rocks!

I really like this one.

love the ending

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

2 posted 2001-10-12 01:50 AM

VERY NICE

Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-10-12 04:52 AM

Good thoughts Nate...and I will see you in heaven...James

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2001-10-12 09:35 AM

Thank you all, for the wonderful replies!

Nathan

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2001-10-12 06:50 PM

Nate this was GREAT, HEHE.
Seriously, I like the way your mind works.
Im putting this in my private library

<3 RosePetal

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-10-12 06:50 PM

Oops, forgot to add it to my library hehe

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-10-12 08:22 PM

I'll save you a place my friend. . .

great job. . .

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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2001-10-12 09:00 PM

Wonderful....Welcome Back~ I enjoyed this so much....

Lauren~

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I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

9 posted 2001-10-13 02:05 PM

Thanks Sven, Rose Petals, and Greeneyes for your wonderful comments!

Nathan

DYME
Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

10 posted 2001-11-04 11:59 AM

I'm gonna cry!! This one touched me. Keep doin' what cha doin'. peace

I'm not crazy...I have papers to prove it!!

No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2001-11-04 12:28 PM

enjoyed

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-11-04 12:59 PM

Awesome write, Nate!! Thanks for sharing it with us.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

13 posted 2001-11-04 02:37 PM

Wonderful words, Nate.....we'll all see each other there someday....

God bless America, my home sweet home.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

14 posted 2001-11-04 02:59 PM

Nate you write beautiful words.I'm going to save this.It will help alot of people in their times of need.I will see you there.
Peaches

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