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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-11 01:23 PM

It can never be
unless …
we dream
together.
Our dreams link
and we share
deeply
as we dream
together.
Sharing our dreams
easy as speaking
or writing
or talking
together.
Sharing our dreams
whether apart or
alone or
together.
Proximity means
nothing since
words
carry miles and miles
over land and
sea
carrying their
thoughts and
dreams
that we happily share
together.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-11-2001).]

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2001-10-11 01:28 PM

Interloper~ This speaks to me...I know the feeling of being connected only by dreams because of distance. You've expressed it so eloquently.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-10-11 01:28 PM

Oh, and this is a nice spin off of a very nice poem. Thanks.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-10-11 01:34 PM

together in dreams
we find a way
quietly whispering words
we want to say
in our minds
our thoughts are real
of this love
our hearts feel
giving, taking
uniting us two
together in dreams
just me and you.....

"One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you
can't utter". ~James Earl Jones

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

4 posted 2001-10-11 02:06 PM

Imagine, then, the impact of the letter received back in the times of Civil War, World War I, II, the Korean, Vietnam...

how your words brought this to mind...

how spoiled we are today...

Well done, Sir!

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-10-12 06:46 AM

Yes...I ditto Lady in White. What special bond those letters brought. Your poem did bring that sense of perfect nostalgia.

Sincerely,
Regina

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-10-12 07:28 AM

"Proximity means
nothing since
words
carry miles and miles
over land and
sea"

Beautifully captured Interloper ... when our dreams and words can travel such distance, our connections remain strong ... very nicely written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-10-12 09:00 AM

Well done Interloper. As long as we can love...distance, time...nothing can stop it.
~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2001-10-12 07:55 PM

Proximity means very little indeed when we love...

Nicely said...

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

9 posted 2001-10-12 08:21 PM

Great inspiration.

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