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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-09-21 08:25 AM



Follow The Silver Trail

Bring me back the stars
We used to light the sky
Follow again loves path
On starlight wings to fly

Bring me back the stars
Ones we used to thread
The silver glowing nights
Shine love upon my bed

Bring me back  the stars
Ones we used to chart
To follow the silver trail
Entwine again love heart

Bring me back the stars
I’ve saved you a place
Glow forth with desires
Loves dreamy embrace

Bring me back the stars
Upon my pillow tonight
Assemble those dreams
Shining through starlight

Bring me back the stars
All glitter and gleaming
Sensually filling the night
To where I am dreaming

Hope©2001



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The Rusty Knight
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1 posted 2001-09-21 01:49 PM


I have read a lot of poems calling lost loves...this is among the top 10...I have a soft spot for dreans and

Bring me back the stars
All glitter and gleaming
Sensually filling the night
To where I am dreaming

could be a poem on its own...

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

HopeS
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2 posted 2001-09-21 11:41 PM


Hey thanks Rusty Knight for such , kind  compliments
Hope

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3 posted 2001-11-06 04:15 PM



I think this starry piece needs to be seen again....

Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-11-06 04:21 PM


Thanks Karilea for bringing this one to the top again for somehow I missed it the first go round.  This is just beautiful Hope!
Thoroughly enjoyed.  
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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5 posted 2001-11-06 04:46 PM


Hope,  you write romantic poetry so well.
I thoroughly enjoy reading your words..

The Lady of Shallot
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6 posted 2001-11-06 06:54 PM


I love the stars, each and every one.  Why, I pretend they are there just for me. Silly huh?  Well, I do!  And you know something?  I believe it!  I enjoyed this.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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