Open Poetry #16 |
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Follow The Silver Trail |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia ![]() |
Follow The Silver Trail Bring me back the stars We used to light the sky Follow again loves path On starlight wings to fly Bring me back the stars Ones we used to thread The silver glowing nights Shine love upon my bed Bring me back the stars Ones we used to chart To follow the silver trail Entwine again love heart Bring me back the stars I’ve saved you a place Glow forth with desires Loves dreamy embrace Bring me back the stars Upon my pillow tonight Assemble those dreams Shining through starlight Bring me back the stars All glitter and gleaming Sensually filling the night To where I am dreaming Hope©2001 |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I have read a lot of poems calling lost loves...this is among the top 10...I have a soft spot for dreans and Bring me back the stars All glitter and gleaming Sensually filling the night To where I am dreaming could be a poem on its own... Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey thanks Rusty Knight for such , kind compliments Hope |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think this starry piece needs to be seen again.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Thanks Karilea for bringing this one to the top again for somehow I missed it the first go round. This is just beautiful Hope! Thoroughly enjoyed. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hope, you write romantic poetry so well. I thoroughly enjoy reading your words.. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I love the stars, each and every one. Why, I pretend they are there just for me. Silly huh? Well, I do! And you know something? I believe it! I enjoyed this. ![]() -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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