Open Poetry #16 |
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All Perfectly True |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia ![]() |
All Perfectly true The trees and stars All perfectly true The grass I walk Neath sky of blue Flowers in bloom As petals unfold Sat by the ocean Neath sunset gold Waterfall cascade Streams that flow Colours to view Neath a rainbow Fragile butterflies Birds sing for me Beauty to realise Neath all sincerity Nurturing insights Gives me reasons Eyes open to see Neath all seasons Hope © 2001 |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Fragile butterflies Birds sing for me Beauty to realise Neath all sincerity Nurturing insights Gives me reasons Eyes open to see Neath all seasons ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A very delightful poem to read. Lovely and peaceful. Deb ![]() |
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Sinister Handed Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 58 |
Excellent poem. Tranquil, yet so full of life at the same time. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
This is lovely...it trickles off the tongue ![]() Hugs, ~Krista ![]() Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 10-12-2001).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very beautiful....brilliant write! Nathan |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
this is such a lovely poem ! ![]() cottage |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Blooming Rose , I am so pleased you enjoyed reading my words , your response is appreciated Hope ---------------- Hey thanks sinister , yes tranquil and full of life quite the mixture as my mind paints the picture Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Krista for your response, I am pleased you enjoyed the flow of the poem Hope ------------------------- Hi Nate , thanks for your kind comments much appreciated Hope |
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