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My Resplendent Memory..........
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My Resplendent Memory.......... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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It’s in the dark I find you Here, alone with me Midnight reminiscing My resplendent memory You come to me in shadows In whispers subdued by night Seeking me in stillness Bathed in soft moonlight Preferring to stay Just slightly out of view You make my heart reach out And ache again for you In this late remember In these hours I can’t sleep I allow myself a bit of you That part I’ll always keep Walking gently through My heart’s recollect I know you’ll always be here Always have the same effect You’ll keep my love in longing For things not meant to be Residing here forever more My resplendent memory ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You’ll keep my love in longing For things not meant to be Residing here forever more My resplendent memory ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ah Susan...You know I love this...even though, it is a little sad. Good one sweetie. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
memories are a beautiful thing........ sometimes they are all you have.... beautiful writing, miss i really loved it!!!!!!!!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You come to me in shadows In whispers subdued by night Seeking me in stillness Bathed in soft moonlight Preferring to stay Just slightly out of view You make my heart reach out And ache again for you In this late remember In these hours I can’t sleep I allow myself a bit of you That part I’ll always keep ================================= the ache of again...dont I know... somethings we must keep for ourselves in that place a bittersweet beauty here..lovely phrasing. well done poetess S. Here I stand like it matters... |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
wonderful poem...reminds me of someone after reading this. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sometimes that's a place I like to be. To remember the bittersweet memories..... Lovely, Sea. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Sinister Handed Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 58 |
Sad but sweet. Wonderfully written. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
In this late remember In these hours I can’t sleep I allow myself a bit of you That part I’ll always keep A place I sometimes find myself at this hour. Great poem. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sea, its it not funny that we get these memories at night? I find I always think of those I love that are gone in the evening when all is quiet. Perhaps, we need a silenced heart to hear them calling? This was lovely and of course you realize you opened the floodgates of my memories with this one. Thank you Susan. ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEA, Insomnia has its advantages. Sweet thoughts of lost times and opportunities. It seems like a parallel experience. Specific memories brought to mind again by your sweet words. Thanks. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
SEA~ I always find that thoughts I hide from myself during the day always pop up in the hours when I can't sleep...this was a beautiful write Susan, full of the bittersweetness of remembering past loves. Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nancy~  thank you I'm happy you liked this Doreen~ thank you so much.....  Janet~ ahhh, and keep we do thank you Cottage~  thank you Dee~ yes, me too thank you Sinister~ thank you Mysteria~ no and yes..it is in that quiet time, that they come find us......but are we listening? thank you Larry~ yes......thank you very much Krista~ funny how that works huh? thank you ~SEA "One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Your writing is getting better and better. This one is a definite keeper. Thank you and (((hugs)))Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you Michael, as is yours, I look forward to your poetry always thank you sweet friend (((hugs))) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A keeper, indeed! |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Memories make love to the mind.....don't they? I enjoyed this. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ thank you The L of S~ yes, sometimes they sure do thank you |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Forget the damn memories...I want the real thing!  SEA, this was a very (bitter) sweet poem, and I love that word "resplendant" Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold [This message has been edited by Apachecat906 (edited 10-12-2001).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan this was aching in its longing. sincere in its meaning...you do surely have the gift hon! the sadness of this just leapt off the page at me. beautiful write! take care. amy p.s. i hope you get to make some new memories someday soon! "I could kiss you in |
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