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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-10 07:55 PM

Visions of an experience
Memories to hold in abundance
A touch so soft and tender
Even silk is not smoother
A smile from angelic eyes
Fresh from flower fields of paradise
A heart so loving and warm
Caring, comforting from harm
A flower from my island
Came to me and held my hand
When times' rough and tears flow
Arms outstretched like a rainbow
Wrapping me in butterflies wings
Until the canaries stop whistling
As I rest knowing love is but reality
The morning dew opens a white rose's beauty

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-10-10 08:28 PM

Oh, Daniel, this is sooooooooo beautiful, soft and lovely! Very well done!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-10-10 09:01 PM

I am new to this site....but I want you to know that I appreciated this visual read...
A lot of love and feelings are in this poem.
thanx.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

3 posted 2001-10-10 09:11 PM

Lovely.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-10-10 09:35 PM

'Even silk is not smoother
A smile from angelic eyes
Fresh from flower fields of paradise'

Beautiful images, Daniel...this is definitely an excellent write! I truly enjoyed this!

sp

And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

5 posted 2001-10-11 08:06 PM

I've read several poems about memories this evening. This is captivating.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

6 posted 2001-10-11 08:20 PM

BEAUTIFUL. I love the vision.
Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2001-10-11 10:38 PM

Daniel,

Nice to see you hon

Beautiful poem!! Very visual, I liked
this very much...as always your writing
is superb!

take care.
Amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-10-11 10:42 PM

Daniel...very beautiful and oh so....*sigh* romantic. ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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