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Open Poetry #16
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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
0 posted 2001-10-09 08:07 PM


We made a journey
together
you and I
It was hard
but it had its glory
And it had to end
not in its start
not half way
It ended at its end
completed
All roads travelled
but none saved
© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455
1 posted 2001-10-10 12:23 PM

All roads travelled
but none saved

Love these lines, walker.  Though the poem is sad, you've written it well.
cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
2 posted 2001-10-10 12:58 PM

This is sad but I agree, well written...take care!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer
Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
3 posted 2001-10-10 01:15 AM

Walker,
A collection of lifes experiences ultimately understood and clearly stated.  Sad, huh?  Well done.

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either.  larry c
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