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Open Poetry #16

Drifting

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-09-21 12:01 PM

Drifting

there is a ship
that rocks on foam
drifting in darkness
lost in it’s way
disoriented I plea
to shine me home
as the wind strips
my sails to fray

I yield beneath
the black velvet curtain
great northern star
where should I go
for only in your direction
am I certain
unblind these eyes
as you show

salted spray
floods my eyes
fear is my newest
best friend
an angry ocean
silences my cries
pulled by a storm
that just won’t end

I scream for grace
from sky and sea
a squall to return
back to calm
release this force
that rages me
northern star I rest my path
in your palm

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

1 posted 2001-09-21 12:04 PM

beautiful...may your path be over calm waters. enjoyed this a lot
alan

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-09-21 03:38 AM

OneSlickLady~
I can feel the anguish in this one~

Here's to clear sailing gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-09-30 03:31 PM

very sad in depth, very poignant

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

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