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Parker
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0 posted 2001-10-09 05:25 PM


The Kiss...(a sonnet)

Today I spied the lips of Goddess Red
So deep and full with want my mind gone mad
The hours I could but swim within their bed
And dare the gods to say that I not have!

The living night has gifts n'er seen before
This mouth has sought the goddess of the wind
Who's full embodied lips not one ignores
And I confess to crave this taste of sin

Is sacrifice to be the bane I pay
This mortal heart is weak inside of this
To raise my sword today within the fray
The madness I now live to have her kiss

Is love not blind and reckless to the core,
This answer I will get and maybe more.

James Parker Haley Oct 9, 2001

[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 10-09-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 James Haley - All Rights Reserved
Dee
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1 posted 2001-10-09 05:40 PM


Parker, I love the way you do that. Another beautiful sonnet from your pen.

Dee

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sunshinemist
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2 posted 2001-10-09 05:42 PM


very beautiful sonnet. Good work!  

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

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3 posted 2001-10-09 06:18 PM


mmmmmmmm Parker, you make a girl want to give you kisses   you do such a beautiful sonnet.....now if I could just hear you read it to me....(hint hint) I've heard talk about your ahem...mic....do share   won't you please????  
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4 posted 2001-10-09 09:45 PM


A well-executed sonnet, good sir  
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5 posted 2001-10-09 09:52 PM


Oh, *sigh*...a lovely sonnet, poet Sir.
~smiles, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

Honeybee
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6 posted 2001-10-09 10:24 PM



Parker, you're the Casanova of sonnets - this was sensually beautiful!  
And you live how far from me?!   hehehe

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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7 posted 2001-10-09 10:33 PM


Just lovely!

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Parker
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8 posted 2001-10-09 10:49 PM


Dee, thank you sweet lass.  

sunshinemist, thank you kindly.  

SEA, thank you. I'll share my mic with you and anything else you want.  

Balladeer, thank you good sir. I counted a few times hopefully I didn't miss any.  

Nancy, thank you kindly.  

Melissa, hey now don't be teasing me. But I'd love to come and recite them under your belcony.   Oh, and about one half hour or so.  

Mysteria, thank you kind poet.  

Parker

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9 posted 2001-10-10 12:39 PM


I would say your conclusion is correct, and sweetly so. This is beautiful.

Love has many masks. I am but one of them.

SmittenKitten
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10 posted 2001-10-10 01:59 AM



"Today I spied the lips of Goddess Red
So deep and full with want my mind gone mad
The hours I could but swim within their bed
And dare the gods to say that I not have!"


You sound like a man who gets what he desires   And by the comments I've read here and from other poems of yours, I bet there's plenty of women here who would love to possess those Goddess red lips!  Very sensual write here Parker    may you find your answers  

Hugs,
~Krista  



Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2001-10-10 05:31 AM


Wonderful expressions...James
Dee
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12 posted 2001-10-11 07:26 PM


Can't let something as swoon worthy as this disappear just yet  

Dee

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Martie
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13 posted 2001-10-11 07:42 PM


Parker--you do know how make a sonnet beautiful!
Parker
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14 posted 2001-10-22 11:38 PM


LoveLetters, well thank you  

SmittenKitten, or Krista, thank you. So would you be one of them.  

James, thank you kindly sir.  

Dee, I would fade away on you now.  

Martie, thank you sweet lady.  


Sorry I took so long to reply, I was sure I replied... the mind is a terrible thing to waste.  

Parker



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15 posted 2001-11-04 01:43 PM


I was obiviously having a couch day when this was posted, because I'm just reading this now!  Yeah Yeah Yeah......don't even say it!  

Marina

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Marina Crossley



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16 posted 2001-11-04 07:43 PM


I love sonnets and romance so this beautiful sonnet rates number one with me. BRAVO!!!!Excellent!!!  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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17 posted 2001-11-04 07:49 PM


Oh how beautiful! Kisses are a wonderful sign of affection! hugs too : )

XOXO,
RP

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 11-04-2001).]

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18 posted 2001-11-04 08:36 PM


Nicely written Parker...you crossed all of the T's and dotted the right I's and 10
syllables per line....very romantic
write of love for another.  enjoyed.

Mark Bohannan
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19 posted 2001-11-05 06:02 PM


Beautifully expressed by the master of Sonnets.  This as are all of your sonnets,
was a real treat to read.  Well done sir ... now keep them coming.

Parker
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20 posted 2001-11-05 06:28 PM


Marina, I won't say it promise. Thanks for replying from your couch.  

Startime, thank you very much.  

RosePetal, thank you I can always use hugs too.  

Magnus, thank you but the count is really the easy part.  

Mark, Master I think not, tinkerer more likely, hopeless romantic tinkerer.  

Parker

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21 posted 2001-11-06 12:38 PM


hmm..i remember reading this one..must have been in a rush out the door as i didnt respond to it..!  

but its wonderful the 2nd go round too!  you do have a way of putting words together...and making romance...  

much enjoy reading you ..  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

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22 posted 2001-11-06 12:49 PM


Very very nice. Well written.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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23 posted 2001-11-06 01:17 PM


A beautiful sonnet, to be sure. But may I rename it a Haley's Comet?
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24 posted 2001-11-06 02:49 PM


OK....Im mud...
I could have SWORN I replied to this!!
I read it the day you posted it!!
Oh NO??? could it be your memory is catching up with me  ROFLMAO

Oh my poet God of sonnets...can you forgive me ...  
I wish to worship this gift from your pen ...
tell me its not too late to build you pedestals     
I must have been weak from swooning and couldnt reply ...
if I beg on bended knee might I still inhale thy rhymes divine????
"The living night has gifts n'er seen before
This mouth has sought the goddess of the wind
Who's full embodied lips not one ignores
And I confess to crave this taste of sin

Is sacrifice to be the bane I pay
This mortal heart is weak inside of this
To raise my sword today within the fray
The madness I now live to have her kiss"
====================================


Well you know I love your sonnets and the vocab in this is as fab as the cadence
and I know you keep telling me green tea and ginsing...
but this one calls for rasberry baby...
lots of rasberries  

Sin away my sonnet king........
and yeah...this one would have been perfect to recite...
Lots of S's to ssssssin on  

I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever ... you still take my breath away ...

Marina
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25 posted 2001-11-06 02:55 PM


This is turning into some kiss!  WOW , you should write about me more often.  Yeah, I know ...in my dreams and back to my cage.      Can't blame me for trying...  

Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.


Marina Crossley



Parker
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26 posted 2001-11-06 03:37 PM


dg, sweets i'll have to try harder if your rushing out the door without a good kiss.  

Abigaile, thank you very much.  

Midnitesun, well don't know might already be copywrited or somethin...  

Janet, begging on bended Knee works for me. Yesssss that really works for me.  

Marina, well we all need dreams! don't we.
I'll forgo the telling of my dreams, for now.  

Parker

Janet Marie
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27 posted 2001-11-06 04:07 PM


sssssssssomehow I just KNEW that it would

ya know Arcccch makes that sound
so does the s in reversssse
you know--like in backwards

ROFLMAO

now ssssse what youve sssstarted     
       

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