Open Poetry #16 |
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Revolving Doors |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Revolving Doors I have tried doors that were locked didn’t answer when opportunity knocked there are many things I didn’t see now this is the new beginning of me things we want aren’t so easy to arrange life’s one true constant is change weathering winds that sweep us off our feet knowing when to get back up when we feel beat relearning the difference between want and need need should be nurtured it’s a soul seed for a soul like a seed ignored will wither and die the secret to effort is follow through with try can’t turn around retracing my path of tears they have paved the way and brought me here and I won’t answer if a fool knocks at my door I now hold my own key and I deserve more "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 10-08-2001).] |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Keep going. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Helen...keep yer door locked, fools don't knock--they just rush in! ![]() LOVED the strength in this! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Helen, very gentle smile, this was marvelous, loved all of it, as it is so true..very well done |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
always going forward. . . never looking back. . . excellent helen. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This is really good Helen. A powerful message and renewal. Sincerely, Regina |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a very true reflection of life. I love the ending and I won’t answer if a fool knocks at my door I now hold my own key and I deserve more A perfect sentiment to close the chapter of one part of life, and start a new, stronger chapter. I think this will be my new motto as I start my next chapter If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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