Open Poetry #16 |
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If there was no Heaven... |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
If there was no Heaven; no streets of gold to tread; no band of angels waiting to greet me when I'm dead; If there was no crown of life; no mansion built for me; If the gates of pearl were just a myth and there was no crystal sea; If there was nothing to be won; no rewards that bore my name; If there was no Paradise I would have loved you just the same. If there was no "Well done, my son" and I received no robe of white; no walk and talk with saints of old; no brilliant, blinding light; If the end was just the end; One day I'm here and then I'm gone; If there was no throne to kneel beside; no sands of time to walk upon; If the only thing you ever gave was the blood that stained a cross; Still I'd serve you to my dying day no matter what the cost. Thank you for walking by my side and for your mercy great. Thank you for all you've done for me and for my home that's on the way. You've already done so much for me that I really need to say... If there was no Heaven I would have loved you anyway. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sounds like you found Heaven already.... ![]() |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Beautiful poem and tribute. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed....James |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Talk about undaunted faith ! ! This is WONDERFUL~ I feel this is worth submitting to the main site and sharing with the world. Bless you for sharing it with me~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
How glorious is your faith! I too join you in saying I would love Him anyway! He is our all! This poem is magnificent and wonderfully inspiring! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A very inspiring piece WEll done Liz |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
TA Margie girl is right this is utterly utterly fabulous. You should have this on the main site. This is a gift of pure wonder, you have written an absolute beauty here. walk on in HIS light Love and warm stuff Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful ponderings in this heavenly piece Tennessee Angel ... very much enjoyed this uplifting and inspirational piece! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh, I like this. I'm glad there really is a heaven. Thank you for posting it. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Tennessee Angel, A wonderful poem of faith and gratitude. I plan on saving this to my library collection so I can visit it when I need encouragement and refreshed perspective. Thanks for sharing this GEM, Dennis |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
tennesse angel, your faith is refreshing, this is lovely and inspiring! ![]() [This message has been edited by Chelsea~ (edited 10-08-2001).] |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
AMEN! This is just beautiful! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is one of the most beautiful expressions of faith that I have ever read! Very well done! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is absolutely wonderful! ![]() I'm printing it out right now. You really should enter this beauty in a contest - you would touch the hearts of many ![]() Well expressed, this is so beautiful! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
utterly beautiful penned, precious gem that will be saved in my library. Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
TA - this is a marvelous write, and you must know, there are angels all around you, willing to share this remarkable piece... |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Truly your hand was guided by God. Just a magnificent write done in unrelenting faith. You are blessed. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Your poem is so touching and inspiring. Thanks for posting it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
What a wonderfully refreshing read. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL POEM!! Thank you for sharing. AMEN! God Bless you. ![]() smiles ~Marie~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is a true love poem Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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