Timeless Waltz sorry needed a change of pace

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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-09-18 12:42 PM

Timeless Waltz

In warm glow
of passion spent
sighs of lovers
entwine
in murmurs of tranquility

bathed in gentle radiance
buoyant hearts
nestle
in tender repose

where eyes
waltz
upon the stage
of timeless devotion

09-18-01

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

[This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 09-18-2001).]

serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-09-18 12:50 PM

I needed a change of pace too. This was just the thing, too. Beautiful, I felt as though I were watching this through a window. Oh...I did..smile...lovely and ethereal in quality.

Duncan
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2 posted 2001-09-18 01:59 PM

Truly a moment in time that has not changed. Beautiful and much appreciated!

Pip
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3 posted 2001-09-18 02:16 PM

The rhythm and flow are surreal, very compelling, drew me completely in!

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

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Washington State

4 posted 2001-09-18 02:35 PM

Yes a time for a change and you did it beautifully. Joyce

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

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Texas

5 posted 2001-09-18 02:42 PM

entwine
in murmurs of tranquility

I love this passage...it has a feel and sound to it that makes me want to be there.

and the rest of the piece frames it well

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26

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Phoenix, Az

6 posted 2001-09-18 02:49 PM

Thanks for the change of pace...very refreshing...as we all need to get back into whatever type of normalcy we can have...this is beautiful!
Cindi

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

7 posted 2001-09-18 02:53 PM

Beautiful!

Charisma

Pell
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since 2001-09-16

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Pacific NW

8 posted 2001-09-18 03:09 PM

Lovely words, a nice change of mood indeed.
Makes me feel a bit like a voyeur, but I peek in joy, without shame. A wonderful affirmation.

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

9 posted 2001-09-18 05:13 PM

I think we all needed a change of pace and you did it so gracefully.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

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Calif.

10 posted 2001-09-18 05:44 PM

Thank You!
~Connie~

Songbird
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Missouri

11 posted 2001-09-18 06:13 PM

Very lovely moments, described beautifuly.

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2001-09-18 06:23 PM

Indeed...James

Sven

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13 posted 2001-09-18 07:05 PM

now, this is a change of pace I like. . . thank you my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

14 posted 2001-09-18 08:53 PM

Very well done and a welcomed change of pace indeed.

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Suzanne Arlene
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Ontario, Canada

15 posted 2001-09-18 09:00 PM

i enjoyed that very much. Made me feel like dancing in someones eyes. SIGH lovely write

Suzanne

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

16 posted 2001-09-18 10:23 PM

Everyone, Thank you ALL, so very much for the
great responses. I hope not to offend anyone with the timing of this piece.

Thanks again, each of you. ((HUGS))

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

RSWells
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17 posted 2001-09-18 11:55 PM

A needed ray of sunshine through what has been a very dark cloud. No apology necessary.

DawnG

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United States

18 posted 2001-09-19 12:16 PM

Thank you for this beautiful piece. Been a rough week for us all, and this beauty will surely be a great leap back into a bit of normalacy.

Dawn

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

19 posted 2001-09-19 12:53 PM

Rs, Dawn,

thank you both so much.
I really appreciate the feedback.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

BloomingRose
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20 posted 2001-09-19 04:54 PM

With all the sadness in our nation, this is welcomed beauty.

Hugs,
Deb

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

21 posted 2001-09-20 08:56 AM

Deb,

thank you, I am happy you liked it.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

22 posted 2001-09-21 07:28 AM

You need never explain away the desire to gift a beautiful penning...

thank you!

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

23 posted 2001-09-23 08:56 PM

Sunshine,
thank you so much for the kind response.

)))

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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