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Silent Surrender.......
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Silent Surrender....... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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As the night falls your memory seeks and finds my weakness for you a door left open in my heart I pretend I closed when you said good-bye I feel you there unwelcome but wanted needed………… I have no means of resistance so quietly I surrender my heart to you……… ~SEA~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah yes... those unlocked doors... very nice SEA... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The heart has a way of ruling our mind doesn't it? Tender words of quiet submission. Like it much. Hugs, Deb |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Simply amazing, what comes out of the dark... enjoyed this very much, our SEA... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Every word of this...amazing, intense, appreciated. Have been exactly there. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
quite fine, you do these sweet romantic moments so well and so tastefully |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You seem to have penned my greatest fear Sea. LOL. I hope that my door can remain closed! Marilyn |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my weakness for you a door left open in my heart ================================== I havent decided if its a door in my heart.. or a hole in my soul... (maybe a hole in my head too)  beautiful bittersweet writing Sea... ya know Im feeling every word. slow burn ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ 'a door left open in my heart I pretend I closed' Sneaky little rascals aren't we ?  Reminds me of one of my own favorite poetic thoughts~ 'I remembered - to forget - to lock the door' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, This is very lovely and sad. Nice work, my friend. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely words written here,I have no will power of my own, when it comes to love.  |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Those pesky ghosts again...*S* at least you are doing the right thing, in my opinion. But what is that worth? LOL Another good one. I really liked these lines I have no means of resistance so quietly I surrender my heart to you……… |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I have no means of resistance so quietly I surrender my heart to you……… Over and over again, every night. We can talk a good talk during the daylight hours, but night shows just how wobbly our walk is, doesn't it? Well written! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ron~ thank youDeb~ oh yes, afraid so thanks Deca~and what stays in the dark thank you JLR~ that is wonderful, thank you so much for that VAS~ thanks Marilyn~ I wish I had a lock for you Janet~ glad you liked, it's a hole all right...LOL one that can't be filled...LOL thank you Marge~ I like that a lot, definately understand that thought.... thank you Michael thank you sweet friend (((hugs)))Walker~ will power??? what is that?! LOL me either PK~ your opinion is worth more than you think, clearly.... I'm glad you liked thanks Illusion~ yeah, I don't walk very well in the shadows...LOL thank you! ~SEA |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- Oh yes! I like this lots! "a door left open in my heart I pretend I closed" I know that door all too well. Love it! Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
SEA-Thank you for sharing this tender write, I sense I have already been here myself. |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
SEA, all it would take is a smile, a laugh or a soft whisper and I'd unbolt the door I enjoyed this a lot. Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Very lovely and the emotions are vivid. Nicely said. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea this is a nice little piece of your heart...James |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
I don't believe anyone has the willpower to resist love's surrender...nicely done if a bit sad. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may the beauty of true love forever shine in your heart and may you forever make the sweet surrender into his wonderland! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sweet! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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