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Bid Adieu
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Bid Adieu |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Bid Adieu These tears I cry, I cry for you Naught enough, my love held true 'Twas born to die, this much knew Sweet heart's pain could only rue Candid affirmations left no clue On languished love, left to chew Adjourned, nevermore to love anew Vanquished eternal, love's lustred hue Through swelling hazes, coloured blue Once perceived, now known true A final farewell, last bid adieu Defining thought, last breath of you! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Eddie, I don't know what to say for this reflects my emotions so entirely at this moment.... " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I hope this isnt a reflection of you right now....so sad |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ You write so well. The reader is caught in the surge of your emotions~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle my sweet friend...this cuts at my heart such goodbyes are what tears are made of...you wrote with such intensity one can not help but feel it. If I could I would reach across the miles to offer you the comfort of a hug for whatever it was worth...take care of you sweet one~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Caught in the emotions of goodbye to a lost love, you hold the readers attention with this one. Good write! Deb |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Kathleen ~ then I ask that you take care my friend, for I know that these feelings will pass. Paula ~ Yesterday, today, tomorrow! I think perhaps its an acceptance of ones place in the grand scheme of things. Marge ~ Well I guess I write with my heart on my sleeve, it's the only way I know how. Thank you! Butterfly ~ Intense sums it up very well, but then I think that is the way I am when it comes to love. Rest assured my dear friend your thoughts reach out and are of great comfort, take care! Deb ~ But can we ever say goodbye to love? Is it ever really lost? Thank you! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Candid affirmations left no clue On languished love, left to chew Adjourned, nevermore to love anew Vanquished eternal, love's lustred hue Through swelling hazes, coloured blue Once perceived, now known true A final farewell, last bid adieu Defining thought, last breath of you! =========================== Eagle this is beautiful bittersweet write your vocabulary and cadence is pure poetry... and may I say with each new post your talent and growth is shining... very well done POET sir  wonderful writing Eagle, truely  slow burn ... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, this is so beautiful even in its pain. Take care, Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
So sad...however emotional pieces are the best reads. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
your writing is lovely................ adieu's adieu it's not goodbye a breath that's nigh upon a sigh adieu's a parting for a time await of verse to close a rhyme adieu's adieu a kiss on cheek until tomorrow's dawn will peak |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Janet ~ truly I don't know what to say, your words have this humble poet blushing!  I thank you my friend, take care!Dee ~ I recall the words to a song that says it's a fine line..... Thank you! azblond ~ I agree, I think poetry should stir the emotions be they sad or otherwise. Doreen ~ my words pale into insignificance when placed beside yours. Thank you, take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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