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Hot and Cold
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Miranda Junior Member
since 2001-07-26
Posts 32OOOOOklahoma! |
Hot and Cold Hot and cold... that’s how you run, like a faucet I should hit with a hammer. Turning tepid until I want to climb out of your heavy slickness ... then a soothing fire to lure me back in ... to soak in your embrace. Hot and cold causing my senses to reel from the extremes ... not knowing if I am coming or going... The steam you exhale, clearing my head of right and wrong, causing my skin to prickle, as I willing slide back into your depths... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I enjoyed this... I like both the flow and the words.. nice work here... The steam you exhale, clearing my head of right and wrong, causing my skin to prickle, as I willing slide back into your depths... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The steam you exhale, clearing my head of right and wrong, causing my skin to prickle, as I willing slide back into your depths..." wow...I like that very much.....  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If this is how you are going to work through your writers' blocks.... you are going to be mighty welcome! |
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Miranda Junior Member
since 2001-07-26
Posts 32OOOOOklahoma! |
LOL ... no writer's block currently. This is actually an old peice I just shared. Nope, I am simply slacking the day away. In the middle of an edit, I am trying to put off indefinately! Thankyou, everyone, so much for your comments. Miranda |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Slack away old buddy, this was pretty good! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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