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Open Poetry #15

Hide and Seek

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

0 posted 2001-07-26 02:29 PM

Hide and Seek

My muse is playing hide and seek
I grew tired of searching him out
As I begin to write he joins me
He’s helping guild my pin
He must have grown tired of hiding
It’s boring when you have no one who will play your game

I’m going to start writing some personal poems
It’s my own form of therapy
I know how all of this developed
but I don’t know how it will end
Only a person who risks is free

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-07-26 02:34 PM

Shadow,
Last line the best. Enjoyed

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-07-26 02:47 PM

so then, are you counting to ten before you began seeking?

Yep, I liked the last line, too, the one before what I think is a very fine 'signature'

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

3 posted 2001-07-27 07:45 PM

I'll be curious to read more.

-MVS

"When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said."
--Del Casher

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