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In Yesterday's Fragrance
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In Yesterday's Fragrance |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In Yesterday's Fragrance ~*Marge Tindal*~  In yesterday's fragrance, discreetly worn I come now to you in sweetest adorn Refreshed memories, enticingly new delighting your senses with love imbued Soft against your cheek, in snuggled delight Sculpting new memories into the night Embodying heat in passionate rise arduous reflections mirrored in eyes Billowing of scents emitted on sighs As yesterday's fragrance is recognized All of the pleasures brought into recall shared in a moment of giving our all Lap of love's luxury found in a glance Yesterday's fragrance is tonight's romance ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... the additional use of the sense of smell in this adds the depth and the allure of memorized moments... and repeating those pleasures I enjoyed |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You left me with the feeling that the air I am breathing in just somehow isn't enough... well done our Marge... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Fragrance comes, familiar makes the heart drum, Arriving first, from behind making me twist Round to see, already know whom it’ll be, Familiar, just part of the whole of her. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- What a romantic you are... "Lap of love's luxury found in a glance Yesterday's fragrance is tonight's romance" This just whispers so softly...lovely.  hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You have a fine way with words with romance, Marge! So lovely  Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CPatHair~ Thank you. Those sweet scented sighs bring memories in full cascade. LadyInWhite~ Hmmmmm ! Time to try a new fragrance, perhaps ? ProfessorGloom~ Ahhhh, the scented familiarity is just what I was trying to convey. Thank you. Vicky~ Sheepishly guilty as charged ! LOL ! Glad you enjoyed. *Hugs* Melissa~ Thank you, hon. I have a wonderful little romantic muse that loves to play with my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Classic Margie poetry... you do such lovely things when you turn a phrase.... romantic and aromatic *L*  beautiful Margie-girl meonly you could give love that satisfies the soul... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Thanks, sweetie. Actually I figured out it was a muse gang up of Callie and Mona ... they do present me with a romantic thought or two. I'm really glad you like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I recognize loved ones in this olfactory way..it is such a pleasure..what the nose knows.. Loved the romance of this! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay, I will bring the wine and rolls, you just bring the soft side of you and the night will forever sing with the spirits. Lovely write my sweet lady of inspiration and peace. gv ge yuhi |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Marge, This is beautiful! So sweet and gentle! I really enjoyed reading this! Tanya Dance like nobody is watching |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Ohhhhh, and isn't it nice ? *Hugs* sweet lady. MarkB~ Mmmmmmmmmmmmm ! Mmmmmmmmmmmm ! Sweet cowboy of my heart~ Just name the place ... I'm there ! ! We might not get to the rolls.  gv ge yuhi, too ! *BIG HUGS* RaeOfSunshine~ I do thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
softly sensual, sweetly romantic.....love it!! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Marge! The herbal essence of love blooming all over! Kind of like Aroma Therapy for the heart. Can we bottle this! Sincerely Regina |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Romance is surely in the air with this sweet poem.  Image is beautiful as well. Keep them coming girl! Hugs, Deb |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yannose, I absolutely love it when the love comes out of you in buckets like this! I know this was supposed to be a romantic poem, but know what it reminded me of? The fresh smell of that power by Gramma used, and it always made me smile and then sneeze! Lovely Mz. Romatic Maiden. ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Thank you, honey. I kind of figured you'd like it. RWood~ Hey ! Now that's a great idea ! Thanks ... how many bottles do you want to order ?  BloomingRose~ Always nice to see you in my mailbox ! Thanks so much, sweet lady. Mysteria~ Ah-ha ! As long as it stirred a memory ... that's what counts. Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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