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Slice Of Summer (Haiku)
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Slice Of Summer (Haiku) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Slice Of Summer ~*~ Hot summertime fun gobble cold watermelon toothless spittin’ seeds ~*~ BloomingRose [This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
Hi. I like the image of gobbling watermelon and the piainting work well with it. I do however have a question about "spitten'" is that intentional; as in past tence, they are on the ground? or did you mean "spittin'". But anyway this conjures many memories. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I stand corrected.  Thanks, glad you enjoyed. Deb |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
P.S. Was piainting spelled that way intentionly?  Sorry can't resist.  Deb |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
nice summery ambience ...enjoyed Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
what a view here love the pic you've included, too, and the red watermelon letters, yummmmmmmm! |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
I stand corrected also... it's my lysdexia, grr. dislexia, grrr. dyslexia, grrr. it's dis lexia I have sometimes. grrrrr. I cant type to save my life. I mostly use pen and paper. peace love and understanding...wpwpoet |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- you may have a slice then please leave the rest for me tasty summer treat I just LOVE watermelon!! I LOVE this little poem too. Now, pass the watermelon please! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ Just LOVE your sense of humor~ And I heard it's just a rumor~ That you won a watermelon seed-spittin' contest Without a dribble on your chest ! ! LOL ! What a delightfully fun piece ! I had watermelon for breakfast yesterday ! ! Honest Injun ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love watermelon as well. Wonderful Haiku. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Hmmmmm, now this brings back memories!! Thanks, Deb!! All writing comes |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh lil kiddos and fun |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Koko~ Yep, summer fun! Thanks! Virginia~ Luvvvvvvvv watermelon. Thanks. wpw~ Just kidding my friend, Vicky~ Thanks, I am ready for some cold watermelon right now. Marge~ Here's the truth...YES I did win the contest. He He He Not a drop was missed. Poe~ Thanks, luv the stuff too. Lonewolf~ Nothing like childhood memories of spittin seed contest. I still win. Thanks for stopping by.Way~ Ya! Thanks |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- With the record high temperatures here, I think I could use another cold slice! Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Wondering, if there's still a slice left for me.....'cause it sounds soooooooooo yummy. Love Watermelon... Charisma |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Vicky~ I know what you mean. It's in the mid 90's here in Florida. Cold watermelon hit's the spot on days like these! Thanks for reading. Vandana~ Thank you Charisma~ Passing a slice to you! |
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