Open Poetry #15 |
Affairs of the Heart |
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The time has come for me to say, affairs of the heart, the topic of day. The truth be known I found out true, nothing is more certain to paint us blue. Shattered dreams lay in the dust, causing us to believe there is no trust. No trust in others or our very soul, make us withdraw our loving goal. A heart is made to bear much pain, for only then do we learn to gain. In the mirror we need to look, and tell ourselves why we got took. If the same qualities we continually seek, we set ourselves up to once again weep. Feeling rejected, keeping continually sad, when what we should be is very mad. Don’t give satisfaction to the silly fool, for taking your heart and your love too. To sit and pine after love lost, is selling the heart at a very low cost. Are we basing our whole life on a mistake? or do we go on whatever the take. Stop picking the wound of the heart in its entire, instead bear the pain of cauterizing with fire. Fire of determination and will to live, in your soul you have much to give. Stop your parody of zombie dance, open up your soul with another chance. Cast aside your shackles that ever bind, a lasting love you surely will find. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Thank you for your perspective, there is much truth to your words, very tenderly written. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Logan, I feel so much truth here. It took me time to come to these truths, and a lot of pain. But I finally do believe it, and I thank you for writing so powerfully about the subject. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You m'luv, are a very wise man. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--What Serenity said is true...and wisdom learns from being there, I've found. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You, my gentle friend, are very wise indeed. Thank you for the sage advice. There is much to be learned in these lines. I like this one, into the library it goes for when I need it most. All writing comes |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah..there is much wisdom and truth here sir. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Yes, looking far beyond the tears casting aside all the fears never count back bygone years but take direction in hope and cheer... some of us take a little longer in learning the good lesson |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Words to live by, dear Logan. However, I find that writing about such things, purges the negativity from my soul. *smiles* ~Tier |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Logan, Your expressions here were so lovely. Thank you for writing this inspirational piece--it was just the type of thing I needed to read on this fine morning. Take care of yourself and God bless you for having such a sweet and caring soul...it shines beautfully through your work. Amy "but i see your true colors, |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very wise and well written, Logan. I take these words as a lession to be learned. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A good, swift kick in the bum here, Logan, and I thank you for making me remember what I already know and believe. These words could help many if they but stop to consider them. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Logan- Nicely done, my friend. Much truth, and with a glimmer of hope at the end...I like that.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful words of wisdom, thanks. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
logan Yet another stunning piece of writing from you....absolutely beautiful. Take care...Sue Suetang |
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