Open Poetry #15 |
serenity's voice |
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
In dark of night the voice is clear I feel that she is standing near Sweet sultry tones by birth not choice I feel sadness in serenity's voice We talked of this and that and such words flowed quickly not silent much We spoke of you in awe-filled tone we spoke of this poetic home When time was done by our own choice I heard a smile in serenity's voice |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I hope there was one in yours as well. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much.....made me smile |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Funny thing,, the thought of you two smiling made my eyes water,,, darn, i had best change the filter in the A/C... Nice poem Sharon. ( as always it seems) There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Very nice ... I'll bet talking to you did give her a smile. Friends sharing and caring~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Someone saved my life last night---smiling at you sharon. Poet deProzac!!!! Thank you so much--you are more than a friend...but the sister of my soul. I love you much, lady. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Your voice didn't sound like what I expected...but thre was 'home' in it...we'll do it again SOON!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was very nice, Sharon! All writing comes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely poem, about two of our finest Sandra |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sharon- What a lovely write.. It's always nice to have a friend to talk with and to share a smile with.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is really lovely HUGS to both of you. Maree |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
She needs on o yuh nice poem yuh |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I always knew you were more than just a phantom pen that writes so well, but also a caring women on whom her friends can depend. How special and rare...I wish you and serenity many day filled with smiles! (Waving magic wand..oh dang...I don't HAVE a magic wand...hmmm...)((wishes will do!!)) Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
There is something "real" in the connection to a voice, and you two sounded like you really connected. Nicely done, and hugs for you both! ~ Give the heavens above more than just a passing glance ~And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance ~ I hope you dance. (Lee Ann Womack) |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A 'real' connection is a wonderful experience within our circle of friends, isn't it? Two friends - two smiles... adds up to three - You made me smile as well... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the voice always speaks what the heart cannot hide. . . wonderful deVine. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and sometimes it is all you have to do to achieve happiness...congrats to you two! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
awwwww hugs to both of you! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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