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. . . Caressing your thoughts . . .
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. . . Caressing your thoughts . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
dreaming of whispers wafting through mind silently caressing your thoughts Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Interloper - most beautiful words done with three lines... Nice... BC |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
on soft float of mind thoughts of you grace me in kind memory sublime |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You guys just feed beauty off of each other...enjoyed your 3line quickies that say chapters |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOWTitia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
whispers in dreaming your voice softly calling out... echos reach my heart |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'll return your two "wows" for a sigh and raise you an applause!
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So beautiful Interloper ... this simply whispers through the mind. Lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
inspiration comes through dreams softly whispering through sleep imagine |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOOHOO!! i'm likin that! way cool  do it again! hugs, g |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
I'm not usually a fan of haikus...but those were good! Jeremy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Yes ... you do just that. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I always love it when you write a senryu...this is no exception |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
sweet tranquility hammocks swings bring thee to me dreamers welcome you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bill ~ I do believe your first visit here. Welcome and thank you very much. Ron ~ Ain't it fun being fed by each other's works? VAS ~ Yes, it is. Thanx Titia ~ Aw shux, ma'am SEA ~ our thoughts echoing from and within our hearts' walls mingled lovliness Colleen ~ I fold Kit ~ You mean it worked? GR8 Sunshine ~ inspirational you greeted me the first time and inspire me still fallen rain ~ OK, you're on WD ~ Thanks a lot. You may learn to like them (Haiku and Senryu) in time as I have Marge ~ Golly gee. Now I'm blushing again. Paula Finn ~ Now I'm blushing even more. I don't see many of your comments but I sure enjoyed this one Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lady ~ silent hammock swings dreams are uninterrupted mingled thoughts entwine |
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pooh Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 12iowa usa |
what can i say but wonderful!!!!!!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
carressing thoughts waft across mind filled with you still finding tingle |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
pooh ~ You said a mouthful Ron ~ electrifying thoughts fondled with soft whisper your touch eternal |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Interloper...I'm almost embarrassed to be so late in adding to the appreciation expressed above by others. Quite the touch. Well done. Bob |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
electrified touch awakened lost feeling shocked I found you (sticking tongue out and acting like a brat) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bob ~ No need to worry. I enjoy your visits any time Ron ~ Go to your room and stand in the corner ... after you wash your mouth out with soap |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(laughing) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Another beauty I admire your talents This is soft and beautiful, just the way it should be Liz |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Another beauty I admire your talents This is soft and beautiful, just the way it should be Liz |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ron ~ Now you can add 5 minutes to your time in the corner, young man Liz ~ You admiring my talents is much like Babe Ruth admiring Ted Williams' home run stats Only I'm not as good as the Splendid Splinter was.My sincerest appreciation for your comment. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-11-2001).] |
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