Open Poetry #15 |
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Twenty or Less...#20 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Obliterating margins Obsidian verse Ready To Phrase symbols Across blank edges Savage White pages Challenging My impossible victory (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
YEP... think you have this form well in hand Mark... very well done indeed!! Jet black words painted within margins s l i m defile snow white thoughts yet once A g a i n |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
you make the impossible look quite easy, and I know it is not.... well done Sir! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thanks, Ron. I like the contrasting "retort" of your piece -- WITHIN the margins! Nice thought-twist. Decaflame, thank you. It actually becomes much easier if one opens themselves to "triggers"... that way, the piece "writes itself". -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ever try Microsoft Word? It does all that automatically. Really quite amazing. Puts everything in a neat little box if you wish. But, the again, you really don't want to be IN the box, do you? Of course not ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, definitely don't want to be in the box. But where are your thoughts really going with this. I'm unclear. Sandra |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
That's a good one, Interloper! I actually love Word -- great program. And no. Most definitely never want to be trapped in a box -- just aware of it when one exists... Sandra... how about: Writer's block? Or: Cold-calling? Or, perhaps, dealing with Fear? -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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